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雨意竹林

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Posted: 2009-08-03 15:36:08 Post subject: 雨意竹林

雨意竹林周道模叶，把风剪成青青的碎片…… 枝，挂起诗友筋绊的酒话…… 笋，拱出泥土健硕的生命！一滴，半眠的梦呓…… 两滴，初恋的回忆…… 三滴，自然的呼吸…… 每片叶，坠着晶亮的情…… 每枝话，伸长时间的痒…… 每窝笋，顶破空间的疼…… 我清亮，吹一曲清亮的葫芦丝…… 湿漉漉的音符跳慌了竹影。我湿润，学一串湿润的鸟鸣…… 雨濛濛的鸟声飘飞了竹林。 2009-8-3 下午竹林 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-08-03 16:31:37 Post subject:

读着诗，到竹林中细细地寻你，诗与梦与情与葫芦丝的清丽筑就的幸福窝里，一对幸福鸟儿正交颈而眠，那可是你的伊甸园？

河东阳升
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Posted: 2009-08-03 16:47:01 Post subject:

雨中的竹林在雨中变成雨中的诗行清亮湿润一行行全都留驻在心上好雨好文周道模君好灵感 _________________ 发表文学作品百万字，出版作品选集两部，连载发表长篇小说一部。 Blog: http://blog.sina.com.cn/660591yg366

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-08-03 23:29:36 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

读着诗，到竹林中细细地寻你，诗与梦与情与葫芦丝的清丽筑就的幸福窝里，一对幸福鸟儿正交颈而眠，那可是你的伊甸园？

答米君：我和诗歌女神交颈而眠。问好！
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-08-03 23:31:02 Post subject:

河东阳升 wrote:

雨中的竹林在雨中
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谢河东阳升君的读评！问好！
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米运刚
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Posted: 2009-08-04 15:57:46 Post subject:

“和诗歌女神交颈而眠”，诗情与画意与艳福在握。祝福！

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2009-08-04 17:29:51 Post subject:

谢米君诗意的祝福！有些描眉般的改动。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2009-08-23 22:02:02 Post subject:

雨意竹林情思逸 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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Posted: 2009-09-01 21:26:52 Post subject:

杨光 wrote:

雨意竹林情思逸

谢杨光君的鼓励！问好！
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米运刚
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Posted: 2009-09-05 03:30:04 Post subject:

这几天凉爽，在竹林中品茗聊天，实在美好。

棠棣
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Posted: 2009-09-07 22:24:54 Post subject:

一滴，半眠的梦呓…… 两滴，初恋的回忆…… 三滴，自然的呼吸…… 好。欣赏

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Posted: 2009-09-07 23:50:01 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

这几天凉爽，在竹林中品茗聊天，实在美好。

这几天又闷热喽，秋雷辗碎了梦境。问好！
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Posted: 2009-09-07 23:51:08 Post subject:

棠棣 wrote:

一滴，半眠的梦呓…… 两滴，初恋的回忆…… 三滴，自然的呼吸……
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谢谢唐棣的鼓励！问好！
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