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爽爽贵州行之十一:巴结镇等车
时东兵
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PostPosted: 2009-09-07 17:55:31    Post subject: 爽爽贵州行之十一:巴结镇等车 Reply with quote

爽爽贵州行之十一:巴结镇等车



游完万峰湖

回兴义的车靠在路边

司机坐在家门口检菜

等着坐满了才开车

于是便想在镇上吃饭

鱼市上活鱼在装箱

可饭店里无鱼可食



同游的老孙

在小镇深处探幽

被一阵犬吠撵了出来

一个小姑娘吃着

山上的一种野果

让我也尝尝

甜甜的脸就像

这野果子一样



2009.8.26日创作于贵州巴结镇





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PostPosted: 2009-09-07 20:41:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

蒙太奇的手法,不错!
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