孟东还
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七夕.写真
孩童已摘葡萄净，院落空余葡萄藤。
葡萄一去生难再，架上枝头叶正青。
只待今夕堪附耳：鹊鸣人语两无声！
登高不见牛奶路，星影惨淡月无踪？
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-08-26 13:22:33 Post subject: |
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| 兄从孩童摘葡萄净起笔，既新鲜又出奇并暗交代民间传说。妙！更爱“只待今夕堪附耳：雀鸣人语两无声！”两句。欣赏！ |
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孟东还
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Joined: 14 May 2007
Posts: 47
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| Posted: 2009-08-28 17:41:08 Post subject: |
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| 米运刚 wrote: |
| 兄从孩童摘葡萄净起笔，既新鲜又出奇并暗交代民间传说。妙！更爱“只待今夕堪附耳：雀鸣人语两无声！”两句。欣赏！ |
“雀”字手误，已正为“鹊”。 |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-08-29 02:02:02 Post subject: |
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户籍制度银河阔，千万夫妻盼鹊桥！
凄惨人生童话语，几多家庭受煎熬。
-----多年不变的户籍制度，隔断过多少恩爱夫妻！ |
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孟东还
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| Posted: 2009-09-07 15:49:59 Post subject: |
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户籍制度银河阔，千万夫妻盼鹊桥！
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一个绝对暗淡的七夕夜，别人提前写好的关于它的文字，只好千万人银河通彻，吾惟有数星如豆也！ |
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孟东还
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Posts: 47
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| Posted: 2010-08-02 06:31:19 Post subject: |
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七夕.写真
孩童已摘葡萄净，院落空余葡萄藤。
葡萄一去生难再，架上枝头叶正青。
只待今夕堪附耳：鹊鸣人语两噤声！
登高不见牛奶路，星影惨淡月无踪？
200908261136
200908270021改
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