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走近莲花

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Posted: 2009-01-17 23:39:50 Post subject: 走近莲花

走近莲花 ◎紫木槿走近莲花就是走近一首真纯的恋歌走近皎洁无云而且繁星满天的夜晚美波流动在她高贵的花瓣上花蕊流溢着蜜甜的神韵走近莲花就是走近一种温和、平静而又脉脉含情走近一个善良的生命而且高雅美的光辉普照着她清丽的花瓣花蕊闪烁着奇妙难言的色泽走近莲花就是走近纯洁与珍贵走近一方脱俗而有魅力的天地岁月摧毁不了她的深情她茎上的刺是她对抗庸俗的武器通联：malianhua@126.com

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Posted: 2009-01-17 23:57:51 Post subject:

走近莲花,走近一方脱俗而有魅力的天地 .

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Posted: 2009-01-22 05:18:46 Post subject:

感谢你的器重。

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Posted: 2009-01-22 05:20:14 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

走近莲花,走近一方脱俗而有魅力的天地 .

你的到来对我如同盛大的节日来临！ Very Happy

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Posted: 2009-07-28 03:39:42 Post subject:

zmj166 wrote:

赵福治 wrote:

走近莲花,走近一方脱俗而有魅力的天地 .

你的到来对我如同盛大的节日来临！ Very Happy

一家报社刚发表了

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Posted: 2009-08-01 17:09:00 Post subject: baoshe

赵福治 wrote:

走近莲花,走近一方脱俗而有魅力的天地 .

又一家报社转载了这首诗！！

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Posted: 2009-08-01 21:50:42 Post subject:

不错。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-08-02 19:25:33 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

不错。

最近推荐诗人秀水的一首诗发在一家报上。

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Posted: 2009-09-07 04:44:28 Post subject:

最近又推荐马东旭的一首诗发在一家有稿酬的报上。

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Posted: 2009-09-07 05:01:12 Post subject:

又一家大网转载此作

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Posted: 2009-09-07 09:02:47 Post subject:

个人觉得最后一句可以不要莲花本身就是一种圣洁的代表无须再用它的刺来说明…… 欣赏，如呼吸到荷的芳香有几个月没看到莲花了甚憾 _________________ 锋镝牢囚取次过，依然不费我弦歌。死犹未肯输心法，贫也岂能奈我何。

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Posted: 2009-09-08 05:37:14 Post subject:

三段都比较对称，抒情，传统~问好！

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Posted: 2009-09-11 03:12:18 Post subject:

枫桥 wrote:

个人觉得最后一句可以不要
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我觉得这一句对我来说特别重要！

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Posted: 2009-09-11 03:13:17 Post subject: 向你学习！

半溪明月 wrote:

三段都比较对称，抒情，传统~问好！

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