一壶枫雨 童生
Joined: 06 Mar 2009 Posts: 27
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Posted: 2009-09-04 06:58:53 Post subject: [原创]五绝.山 秋(外一首) |
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[原创]五绝.山 秋(外一首)
山 秋
禅心云水阔
甘露蘸秋声
入画山川静
犹闻野鹤鸣
五绝.沧 桑
沧桑今古事
事外阅沉沦
沦落星云外
明光已破尘 _________________ 春风沐惠,秋月怀清。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2009-09-04 15:13:26 Post subject: |
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如画秋色! "甘露蘸秋声", 好句! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 918 Location: 四川省德阳市 米运刚Collection |
Posted: 2009-09-05 03:18:32 Post subject: |
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二诗俱佳,犹喜《山秋》。问好! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2009-09-05 04:34:48 Post subject: |
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米运刚 wrote: |
二诗俱佳,犹喜《山秋》。问好! |
同感。有王维之风。 |
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一壶枫雨 童生
Joined: 06 Mar 2009 Posts: 27
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Posted: 2009-09-15 21:05:35 Post subject: |
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白云闲人 wrote: |
如画秋色! "甘露蘸秋声", 好句! |
感谢版主好评! _________________ 春风沐惠,秋月怀清。 |
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一壶枫雨 童生
Joined: 06 Mar 2009 Posts: 27
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Posted: 2009-09-15 21:06:45 Post subject: |
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米运刚 wrote: |
二诗俱佳,犹喜《山秋》。问好! |
谢先生赏读。远握致意! _________________ 春风沐惠,秋月怀清。 |
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一壶枫雨 童生
Joined: 06 Mar 2009 Posts: 27
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Posted: 2009-09-15 21:08:28 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
米运刚 wrote: |
二诗俱佳,犹喜《山秋》。问好! |
同感。有王维之风。 |
感谢qinghongh版主,过誉了。问好! _________________ 春风沐惠,秋月怀清。 |
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