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祥子的诗《从遥远的地方赶过来——致学坤》投稿6期

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Posted: 2009-06-21 21:14:09 Post subject: 祥子的诗《从遥远的地方赶过来——致学坤》投稿6期

从遥远的地方赶过来 ——致学坤 ◆陈若祥春天的音乐在风的童话中自由地旋转就像你从遥远的地方赶过来在一个漫长的夜晚在春天之前把春天真实地铺在脚下从遥远的地方赶过来我们可以翻过面前一座山和另一座山在山后，让一切走远让崇尚安静的心灵，在喧嚣之后独自学会超越，超越那乾坤广阔，梦想无边我渴望的目光在关于你的记忆中驻足中断了的梦想在春天展开的瞬间从遥远的地方赶过来沿着曾经的河流漂向远方复活所有的童话

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Posted: 2009-06-23 02:48:30 Post subject:

"在春天之前把春天真实地铺在脚下" 形象生动！好句子！

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Posted: 2009-06-23 13:47:55 Post subject:

好久不见老朋友了！！问候

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Posted: 2009-06-23 21:05:25 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

好久不见老朋友了！！问候

问好子花友，

由于过去一年带高三太忙了，就没时间常来站里。
前天刚刚阅完高考卷，现在终于能够好好欣赏站里的大作了！

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Posted: 2009-08-10 02:34:26 Post subject:

龙飞 wrote:

"在春天之前把春天真实地铺在脚下"
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龙飞现在可好，很久没见你的新作了！

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Posted: 2009-08-27 14:27:46 Post subject:

陈若祥 wrote:

龙飞 wrote:

"在春天之前把春天真实地铺在脚下"
...

龙飞现在可好，很久没见你的新作了！

现在在实习，一忙就顾不上了！
我QQ空间里发了一些，有空你去看看！

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Posted: 2009-08-27 16:35:07 Post subject:

春天的音乐在风的童话中自由地旋转＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＊此有亮点。　关于一首诗的铺叙解释与否或拿捏弦外缪思之翼则依个人取决，守成或攻顶进化自我挑战：）问好诗友。 _________________ 阅夜.冰小夕 http://blog.sina.com.tw/faninsa223/

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Posted: 2009-09-03 17:58:13 Post subject:

冰夕 wrote:

春天的音乐
在风的童话中自由地旋转
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＊此有亮点。　
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问候冰夕！谢谢你评点！
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