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因为你我才感到寂寞
雨中垂钓人
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 06:55:27    Post subject: 因为你我才感到寂寞 Reply with quote

现在的天空很晴朗,
可惜你却不在。
相聚的时光很短暂,
让我们彼此缺少了关爱。
见面少分别长,
更使我们想起往日的精彩。
昨天的一幕一幕,
烙印般的刻在心怀。
往日的一举一动,
总会闪现在脑海。
我留恋那熟悉的写字台,
你的身影仿佛总在。
我驻守在寂寞的港湾,
多少次不禁的徘徊。
千里万里你远行忙碌,
让我总是盼着你的归来。
虽然电话里你笑声不断,
更让我又增添新的等待。
因为你,我才感到寂寞,
生活仿佛为你而存在。
因为你,我才感到寂寞,
你如此牵动我的心脉。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 12:55:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩或許寫得太直白了
就缺少了讓讀者可以想像空間

問好
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PostPosted: 2009-09-03 15:44:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

更让我又增添新的等待。
因为你,我才感到寂寞,
生活仿佛为你而存在。
因为你,我才感到寂寞,
你如此牵动我的心脉。
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