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诗评 - 〈鹤嘴锄〉余光中
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 05:23:47    Post subject: 诗评 - 〈鹤嘴锄〉余光中 Reply with quote

〈鹤嘴锄〉 余光中

吾爱哎吾爱
地下水为甚么愈探愈深
你的幽邃究竟
有甚么珍藏
诱我这么奋力地开矿
肌腱脖脖然
汗油闪闪
鹤嘴锄
在原始的夜里一起一落

魏鹏展评:余光中用「地下水」、「鹤嘴锄」比喻性爱,可说是一首现代的艳词。这首诗最精彩的地方在于形象之余,又不会太露。笔者认为写性爱题材的作品固然不能太露,能在含蓄中写出男性的刚美和女性的柔美,这才是此类题材的最高艺术境界。
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 02:39:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

趣味评论!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 23:36:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨光 wrote:
趣味评论!



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PostPosted: 2009-09-07 10:38:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

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