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游家乡邓州覆釜山（新韵）

bannong
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Joined: 16 Jul 2007
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Posted: 2009-08-31 16:09:32 Post subject: 游家乡邓州覆釜山（新韵）

锈釜覆穰原，汤池遗谷湾。风来松草馥，钟送鸟云闲。万里常为客，一游难遍山。欲寻先祖迹，冢没岭依然。

米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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Posted: 2009-08-31 17:11:31 Post subject:

好个“钟送鸟云闲”，实在闲适；“ 冢没岭依然”，江山不改，精神自留。问好！

白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466

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Posted: 2009-09-01 04:49:25 Post subject:

意满情深! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

bannong
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Posted: 2009-09-02 13:59:46 Post subject:

多谢白云闲人、米运刚老师评点！请多指教！问好！

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