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雨和雲《外一首》
迁客骚人
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PostPosted: 2009-08-26 22:04:09    Post subject: 雨和雲《外一首》 Reply with quote

《雨和雲》


雨思念云的时候

在它上面流泪。雲在下面

承载它的滂沱。雲是有压力的

因为上面有雨。但雲也幸福,

因为上面是它心疼的雨。


雨和雲大部分时间是在恋爱,

有时如火如荼,有时细水长流

雲有时会跟雨说些真心话

雨便会很感动,会躲开云,偷偷地哭。

雲不知道。但雨是爱雲的,

雲知道。






日子有时像风一样轻,但雲不淡,

因为有雨。雲和雨好想永远幸福

呆在一起。雨就在上面,雲就在下面

紧紧相偎。但风大的时候,

会把云和雨分开。于是

雨和雲偶尔会吵架,电闪雷鸣的

雲有时会气得离家出走。剩下雨一个人,于是

雨会哭得昏天暗地,满脸凄离。

直到云心疼地找回雨,说

对不起。我不能没有你。雨

才会收敛起伪怒的花容,恢复

满面温柔细水。



只有天知道,雨和雲

是不会分开的。

雨离开雲便不复为雨

雲离开雨便不复为雲



如果有一天

谁,愿意是我的雨

我,愿意永远是

在她下面

承载她滂沱

默默为她流泪的

雲。



《伞的恋爱》


一把伞,无意遇见
另一把伞。
  一把伞害羞了。
对另一把伞
笑了一笑
于是另一把伞,
漏了一地阳光。

两把伞再次相遇,
  一把伞对着
另一把伞掬出眼波。
   于是另一把伞,
含羞低了笑容。

   一把伞迟豫了一下,
然后鼓起勇气。
   向另一把伞慢步靠近,
一把伞开始心跳。
  另一把伞无端脸红
于是两把伞,渐渐地
变成了一把伞。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-30 15:17:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

真情感人
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迁客骚人
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PostPosted: 2009-08-30 15:47:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水老师你的评语也是真情感人啊。。
哈哈
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PostPosted: 2009-08-30 17:55:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得安静、感人!
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迁客骚人
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PostPosted: 2009-08-31 00:00:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好楼上兄弟。。 Surprised
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