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戏写给里太白

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-08-22 14:49:45 Post subject: 戏写给里太白

戏写给里太白小序，一个叫里太白的诗人来我的博客看我，然后我去他那儿看他，然后决定加他为博友，加他为博友，因感觉他好玩，便顺手写一首诗，作为礼仪。如此如此。你的洋葱很好我得不到我取一个中国市场上的洋葱切开见内里的颜色的确太白但不是李白的白那是一种容易被伤害的白离瀑布和长江都远洋葱的毕竟是西方的种我受不了它呛鼻的味即便它一茬茬生在中国的农田仍驻留欧洲的斌性我说诗人，你西去那么久你骨头里你血液中怎么还停留那么多唐人的毛病连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色 2009-8-23 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-08-22 20:28:02 Post subject:

连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色问好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-08-22 22:49:01 Post subject: 我

也去你博看啦：）

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Posted: 2009-08-23 06:50:19 Post subject:

是那位專寫十四行的里太白吧？ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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Posted: 2009-08-23 10:40:33 Post subject:

洋葱的毕竟是西方的种我受不了它呛鼻的味即便它一茬茬生在中国的农田仍驻留欧洲的斌性我说诗人，你西去那么久你骨头里你血液中怎么还停留那么多唐人的毛病连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色欣赏这种自如，贴切的比喻。问好冲浪

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-08-23 14:20:41 Post subject:

七小姐 wrote:

也去你博看啦：）

谢谢七小姐的光临，不过，我那儿，好长时间没打扫了，荒着呢。
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杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-08-23 14:22:49 Post subject:

戴玨 wrote:

是那位專寫十四行的里太白吧？

哈哈，好像是吧，里太白里伤阴，很像音译的名字。
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Posted: 2009-08-23 14:24:54 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

洋葱的毕竟是西方的种
...

也问好白水，一并问好nobody.
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Posted: 2009-08-23 18:21:57 Post subject:

连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色好诗句!它植根远古的黄土地，源远流长，纵使自己漂洋过海多年，也象罂粟一般在我的血脉里流淌。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/cdjinse23

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Posted: 2009-08-24 06:53:23 Post subject:

斌性？这是创辞了，何解？ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2009-08-24 13:07:11 Post subject:

我说诗人，你西去那么久你骨头里你血液中怎么还停留那么多唐人的毛病连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色這裡寫得很有味道問好

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Posted: 2009-08-24 16:57:23 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

斌性？这是创辞了，何解？

禀性，打错。
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Posted: 2009-08-28 21:29:22 Post subject: 您知道么，

杯中冲浪 wrote:

博弈 wrote:

斌性？这是创辞了，何解？

禀性，打错。

里太白就是里伤隐老师。

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Posted: 2009-08-29 06:03:41 Post subject:

此首，切洋葱很带味儿流露一股 man's talking 的歧义感衍生涩味飘洋过海。而中西合并的熬煮使得骨肉汤特显家乡味＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿尤以末段忒顯著连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色 ________________ _________________ 阅夜.冰小夕 http://blog.sina.com.tw/faninsa223/

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Posted: 2009-08-29 16:32:44 Post subject:

冰夕 wrote:

此首，切洋葱很带味儿
流露一股 man's talking 的歧义感衍生涩味飘洋过海。
而中西合并的熬煮
使得骨肉汤特显家乡味

＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿尤以末段忒顯著

连一颗洋葱
你都能切出月色

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问好冰夕，随手而来，很是惭愧，多多批评。
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Posted: 2009-08-29 19:34:27 Post subject:

挺有味~~ 即便它一茬茬生在中国的农田仍驻留欧洲的斌性确切形象~~ 连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色诗意盎然~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-08-30 00:11:09 Post subject:

连一颗洋葱你都能切出月色问好。 _________________ _________________ 陕西姜华

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