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我看见了离别<80诗歌>
迁客骚人
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PostPosted: 2009-08-26 21:41:04    Post subject: 我看见了离别<80诗歌> Reply with quote

我看见了离别
我看见一颗树离开了一座森林
我看见一片落叶离开瘦弱的枝干将投入大地的怀抱
我看见一只花盆拒绝了中草药的入植
我看见一朵玫瑰刺伤了一朵善良的菊花


我看见了离别
我看见长长的电线杆上站着一只仰望天空的燕子
我看见空旷的天空中大雁一字排开,一只孤鸿掉队了
我看见炊烟哭泣着离开烟囱,爱家的孩子含泪离开村庄
我看见一只蟋蟀跟另一只蟋蟀在夜里挥手道别


我看见了离别
我看见一座新房子跟一座旧房子公开决裂,一个男人跟一个女人大打出手
我看见青瓦俯在灰墙的肩膀上啜泣,一个寡妇独守空房
我看见一位老人在为他的过去而悔恨流泪,一个迷路的孩子找不到母亲
我看见一个乞丐摔破了饭碗,一个流浪汉跟城市道别


我看见了离别
我看见井水跟河水不欢而散
我看见黄土墙与木篱芭吵闹不休
我看见岁月的车轮辗过皱纹,痛苦的女人撕碎心脏
我看见一张惊惶的面孔跟苦难的面包闹分手
我看见幸福的眼泪跟微笑的爱情握手告别


我看见了离别
以及离别后的彷徨,痛苦和慌张。
我看见谁假装幸福地牵着一只
沾满面包屑的大手,在别处建设富足的爱情
我看见谁从我眼睛里走出,深入别人的内心里面
再也没有走出来。我看见谁一步一步
走出巨大的离别
的声音。


我看见了离别
在你离开以后。
最盛大的离别是
我和你不能一起看见这些离别。

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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 00:07:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

浪涛似抒情,戏剧性结尾。
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迁客骚人
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 17:27:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈。周兄的评论也像浪涛啊。感谢感谢。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 17:39:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

有离别就有重逢~~好在这些所见几乎弥漫一生~~

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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 17:40:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好。红姐。哈哈。
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