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七夕有感
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PostPosted: 2009-08-25 04:52:22    Post subject: 七夕有感 Reply with quote

七夕有感

流云逝水两悠悠,

物换星移几度秋?

天际银河今尚在,

抛梭王母怨可休?

离机织女嘘长念,

挑担牛郎笑暂收。

情海苍茫越霄汉,

仙凡代代尽歌讴!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-25 06:12:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

仙凡代代尽歌讴.妙!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-26 05:40:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎光临,盼赐教
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PostPosted: 2009-08-26 13:15:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

“情海苍茫越霄汉,仙凡代代尽歌讴!”写实写心,可舒展多少人情怀。欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 03:12:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

敬谢光临,实感惭愧。比起您的忆秦娥,差远了。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 05:52:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

兄过谦了,拙作十分一般。但我向来认为:只要吐尽心中情感,只要描尽天下锦绣就是好诗词
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 05:40:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

兄台说得好,只要吐尽心中情感,只要描尽天下锦绣就是好诗词 。领教了!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 15:55:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

围城进出乱纷纷,
红粉金身高价真。
放眼屏前情爱处,
仙凡故事渐如尘。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-29 02:06:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

户籍制度银河阔,千万夫妻盼鹊桥!
凄惨人生童话语,几多家庭受煎熬。

-----多年不变的户籍制度,隔断过多少恩爱夫妻!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-29 02:41:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

户籍岂独造河因? 劝君不必究深根。
相逢但云天地事,无妨偶尔端酒樽。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-29 04:41:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

好个“仙凡故事渐如尘。”有如此高度的眼光,实在不凡。讨论闹热。最喜不同见解、不同观点,对人对事,热火朝天。问好,所有参与讨论的朋友!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-29 05:08:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

运刚说得好:"只要吐尽心中情感,只要描尽天下錦绣,就是好诗詞"!
尤其对于我們这些业余的诗詞愛好者來说,咏诵诗詞,只是为了抒发心中的情感,描画大自然的煦丽景色,与好友們交流人生的趣味.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-30 06:37:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

由衷地感谢各位大师,在你们诗词里,我获益不浅。愿广交文友。
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