冷巉
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◆我是个农民
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攀上指尖，找到今生
谁来承载散落的情仇
在尘世面前，我是个弃子
营垒繁华的世态
造就出创世者的身姿
突然发现天曲别韵
用踏青寻觅的灵魂
来陶醉自己肿胀的眼神
凝结在天堂与地狱的距离
我将永远是个农民 |
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-03-10 12:14:02 Post subject: |
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我将永远是个农民
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冷巉
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| Posted: 2007-03-11 03:26:01 Post subject: |
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朋友，请给点意见啊~~~~~~~~````
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nobody
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| Posted: 2007-03-11 13:20:22 Post subject: |
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| 朋友，请给点意见啊~~~~~~~~```` |
虽然宣称永远是个农民，可是言语间不见质朴与直率。不象。哈哈，如果这也是农民，那俺就是贫农，佃农。
当然，农民不一定就质朴直率，也可以很后现代。 
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| Posted: 2007-03-12 04:38:23 Post subject: |
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冷巉
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| Posted: 2007-04-03 08:27:09 Post subject: |
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谢谢几位朋友，其实写完我也觉得很好笑，哈哈~~
问好。
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