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祥子的诗《夏天,也许我会想到雨想到风》投稿6期
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 02:21:55    Post subject: 祥子的诗《夏天,也许我会想到雨想到风》投稿6期 Reply with quote

夏天,也许我会想到雨想到风

◆祥子

这个夏天,来得不早也不晚

当我们送走了最初的春天,在田野

热爱寂静的油菜和麦子,开始成熟

如你在深夜旋低音箱的热度

在我梦的世界,在天空和大地之间,肆意疯长

我的童年故事在慢慢温润

小小的世界里

花蕾怒放



夏天,也许我会想到雨想到风

想到你曾经无人知晓的寂寞

想到是那不可预知的幸福

溢满我们平常的日子

路边的六月

守护一棵树的童话,看着

它殷切地在夏天低低的吟唱



在夏天,你也会和我一起

随着日子的脚步渐渐地慢下来,静静地

守卫我们爱的信仰,我在离你最近的地方

囚禁一个人所有的季节,即使

秋天之后祥和的空旷,也不会有忧伤

当树的叶子再次泛绿,繁华

我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影

看着春天悄悄地走来

看着春天延伸在我们的脚下
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 02:37:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首是写给爱人的藏字诗歌,
每段藏了一句话,
各位可能看出来啊?!
我的那个她第一遍都没看出。
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¤当树的叶子再次泛绿,繁华
¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影
¤看着春天悄悄地走来
¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下
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PostPosted: 2009-08-16 04:17:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习了,人民的老师,遥握!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-16 05:14:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

看着春天悄悄地走来

看着春天延伸在我们的脚下
情思不错,动人
呵呵,没看出来!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-17 14:51:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

李运邦 wrote:
学习了,人民的老师,遥握!


呵呵,问朋友好! Very Happy
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¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影
¤看着春天悄悄地走来
¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下
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PostPosted: 2009-08-18 00:17:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨光 wrote:
看着春天悄悄地走来
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问好杨光!谢谢你评点!
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¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影
¤看着春天悄悄地走来
¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下
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PostPosted: 2009-08-19 09:56:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

温馨的诗歌~~藏了不少话~~

问好~~

把前面指导的学生作品整合了一下~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 04:23:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

"当我们送走了最初的春天,在田野
热爱寂静的油菜和麦子,开始成熟
如你在深夜旋低音箱的热度
在我梦的世界,在天空和大地之间,肆意疯长 "

形象的语言,熟练地表述,风格清新淡雅!欣赏了!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 12:52:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

我愛你我的小蕾
你是我的一切
祥子這樣地書情著
在詩裡

問好
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 14:15:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

戀海 wrote:
我愛你我的小蕾
你是我的一切
祥子這樣地書情著
在詩裡

問好


问好戀海!
你眼力厉害呀!
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¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影
¤看着春天悄悄地走来
¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下
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