米运刚
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Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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 Posted: 2009-08-24 14:04:38 Post subject: 忆秦娥 七夕 |
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忆秦娥 七夕
郎隔岸，两肩浸血奴心剜。奴心剜，弱婴泣乳，呼娘声远。
贤人莫恸泪轻溅，花容憔悴儿魂惨。儿魂惨，浪高千丈，柔情难断。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-08-24 15:34:56 Post subject: |
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"浪高千尺,柔情难断".好句!
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2009-08-24 16:39:32 Post subject: |
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| 成人之美，胜造七级浮屠。拆散鸳鸯，非道义良善所为。 |
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-08-25 00:14:24 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢二位先生品评。情是天地间最可贵，也是最不可战胜的。 |
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369913806
童生
Joined: 30 Jul 2009
Posts: 40
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| Posted: 2009-08-25 04:56:17 Post subject: |
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有声有色，情景交融。好诗!
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2009-08-25 06:14:58 Post subject: |
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奴心剜，弱婴泣乳，呼娘声远。
凄凄切切。感人! |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-08-25 06:27:30 Post subject: |
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感人词作!
问好运刚!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚
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Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-08-26 13:26:33 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢369、冰清、白云诸兄雅评，问好三位兄台！ |
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又一方天
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Joined: 16 Nov 2006
Posts: 385
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| Posted: 2009-08-26 14:43:24 Post subject: |
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| 369913806 wrote: |
| 有声有色，情景交融。好诗! |
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烟波月醉 |
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米运刚
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Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-08-27 05:58:27 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢又一方天品评阅读。 |
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