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周末

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Posted: 2009-08-01 15:11:47 Post subject: 周末

1。季节多像一双变幻无常的手将五谷溶化在无边的水中冷暖自知，大地落满了幸福的陨石２。周末街道两侧的门内关闭着许多没有醒悟的梦蓓蕾在晨光中苏醒枝头的鸟语将天堂的秘语说给有缘人３。雨这时候，我想写雨被笔打湿的雨，昨天又回到我的窗前她舞动着天使的羽衣抖落一地的清凉　４。午后一切都是恬静而和谐阳光交代一下就匆匆地走了草在草地上悄悄地生长小虫在草间跳跃小鸟在高空飞翔一丛花从墙根开出多么美好的季节啊我听见风在午后悄悄的声响　 2009/4/24

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-08-01 22:03:23 Post subject:

比较喜欢最后一首，诗人以白描的手法不厌其烦的描述各种生命自行生长的原始状态，意在烘托渲染午后的安宁，这般的刻意铺垫，似乎为创造那种宗教赞美诗所创造的情调和氛围。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2009-08-02 06:51:48 Post subject:

1也很好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

白水
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Posted: 2009-08-04 16:48:31 Post subject:

我喜欢2。3

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Posted: 2009-08-09 08:21:33 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

比较喜欢最后一首，诗人以白描的手法不厌其烦的描述各种生命自行生长的原始状态，意在烘托渲染午后的安宁，这般的刻意铺垫，似乎为创造那种宗教赞美诗所创造的情调和氛围。

点评非常精确，　非常感谢冲浪，问好。

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Posted: 2009-08-09 08:22:49 Post subject:

谢谢岛主,　谢谢白水，问好二位。

安红红
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Posted: 2009-08-09 16:54:36 Post subject:

挺美好的~~每首诗都安静详和~~自然之物述出自已心境~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-08-22 05:23:47 Post subject:

谢谢安红红的阅评,周末问好.

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Posted: 2009-08-23 06:31:16 Post subject:

周末好，一靜一動，簡短卻又惹人遐想。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

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