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雨的结局
林岳芳
童生


Joined: 24 Jun 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-08-22 14:11:13    Post subject: 雨的结局 Reply with quote

苍天之下

我在寻思一滴雨的形成

和滴落的姿势

雨总以为自己很高

很高

在几千米的高空

孤傲的注视着红尘

借得东风

便一任自己狂妄的

倾盆而下

掉进了水里

泥里

然后无影无踪

粉身碎骨,是你唯一

留给世人的姿势

也是你最后的结局

尽管你之前没有想到

那也只是你

太愚蠢

而已
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诗情画意的江南,养育了一个爱诗歌的女人。于是,在几度夕阳里,我亦歌亦吟,在江南阡陌上,姗姗而来......
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2009-08-23 04:55:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情画意的江南,养育了一个爱诗歌的女人.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-08-24 03:37:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

总觉得后面的结尾不太好~
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