韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 15:42:46 Post subject: |
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顶!好大的鸟,那是上帝的泳衣!问候岛主!问候白水先生!吉祥快乐! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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遛达的七七 秀才

Joined: 07 Jun 2006 Posts: 329
遛达的七七Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 19:57:24 Post subject: |
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严重妒忌一下老和的相机!
同时问候美女新年 :) |
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刘浪 秀才
Joined: 04 Dec 2008 Posts: 227
刘浪Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 20:03:55 Post subject: |
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牛年读犄角,更牛!牛年吉祥! _________________ 是金子也会 花 光地 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 20:08:04 Post subject: |
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语言活脱而有重量!——学习了!
——祝白水新年快乐如意! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 20:14:52 Post subject: |
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牛更牛  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 20:16:40 Post subject: |
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韩少君 wrote: |
顶!好大的鸟,那是上帝的泳衣!问候岛主!问候白水先生!吉祥快乐! |
问好少君, 代问娇娇和你们东北军的诗人们好.牛年牛气  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 20:17:59 Post subject: |
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七小姐 wrote: |
严重妒忌一下老和的相机!
同时问候美女新年 :) |
问好美女, 愿你牛年更多牛诗.  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 20:19:55 Post subject: |
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刘浪, 那天被你的诗歌镇了一次,牛. 盼读到更多  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-01-23 20:21:53 Post subject: |
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山城子 wrote: |
语言活脱而有重量!——学习了!
——祝白水新年快乐如意! |
谢谢老师. WOW, 您的照片好潇洒.
祝您阖家新春快乐  |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-07 14:30:21 Post subject: |
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晕一品红一下  |
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沈奕军 童生
Joined: 31 Mar 2008 Posts: 35 Location: 陕西 沈奕军Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-07 17:23:40 Post subject: |
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从诗歌的角度进行延展 这是我学习中遇到不少太多的 特别是
远远地,远远地驻足
在你身后
看你布满伤痕的羽翼,不,应该说
是 犄角
撞碎一朵云儿, 又
撞碎。。。。。。一朵
-----------------------------意境非常好 我想诗人是敏感的
但能捕捉到如此好的意象更是让人佩服 问好老师 远握 |
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江南雨 秀才
Joined: 03 Jul 2009 Posts: 627 Location: 中国陕西省 江南雨Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-07 22:22:49 Post subject: |
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语言活脱而有重量!——学习了! _________________ 陕西姜华 |
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一品红 秀才

Joined: 13 Jun 2009 Posts: 330
一品红Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-08 02:39:01 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
晕一品红一下  |
我晕,你还是美女呀。嘻嘻。你的名字很有趣,你是中国人吗? _________________ 中国山东,女诗人 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-10 02:18:29 Post subject: |
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问好沈奕军, 江南雨
红红,名字就是一个代码。 就像丢丢,袖袖,猫猫,咪咪,,,,,,就像一品红, 中国称一品红,北美称圣诞红。可她还是她  |
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湮雨朦朦 秀才
Joined: 18 May 2009 Posts: 213 Location: 江西省南昌市 湮雨朦朦Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-10 22:25:51 Post subject: |
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精华诗歌当然要多阅读,问美诗人好. |
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张南城 秀才

Joined: 02 Aug 2009 Posts: 145 Location: 中国安庆 张南城Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-10 23:49:35 Post subject: |
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读你的诗要屏住呼吸一鼓作气越过最后一个字的山岗然后才敢吐纳痛快痛快…… |
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sfiawong 秀才

Joined: 05 May 2009 Posts: 813 Location: US/HK sfiawongCollection |
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zmj166 秀才
Joined: 10 Jan 2009 Posts: 461
zmj166Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-17 03:17:33 Post subject: |
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翅膀——犄角,比喻奇特哦~~~~ |
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戀海 秀才
Joined: 04 Aug 2009 Posts: 383
戀海Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-17 14:12:10 Post subject: |
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喜歡此詩
情感與意象皆豐饒
問好 |
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陈若祥 秀才

Joined: 12 Feb 2007 Posts: 470 Location: 中国*安徽 陈若祥Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-18 01:02:36 Post subject: |
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“我 默默地
检起散落的羽毛
把最后一缕含泪的
丝绢,埋在
菩缇树下”
蕴含淡淡的忧伤!
全诗很有力量感,学习了! _________________ ¤当树的叶子再次泛绿,繁华
¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影
¤看着春天悄悄地走来
¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下
◆安徽凤鸣诗社◆http://blog.sina.com.cn/fmshishe |
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