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《美的虚伪或残缺》三首

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-08-13 22:04:23 Post subject:

迪拜 wrote:

给明月提一个建议
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谢谢迪拜的建议。也有注意到这个问题，下次争取版面更简洁些~

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-08-13 22:06:22 Post subject:

一并感谢大家的回帖~

nobody
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Posted: 2009-08-14 22:58:31 Post subject:

明月，诗集收到了，很感谢。已经看了一半。很精彩。中国诗歌史，掀开了新的一页 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

成都锦瑟
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Posted: 2009-08-14 23:02:32 Post subject:

来学习。三个都有特色，作者眼光独具。最喜欢第一个。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/cdjinse23

山城子
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Posted: 2009-08-14 23:48:44 Post subject:

一首诗被反复修改：先砍掉所有的刺，再磨圆所有棱角然后剪掉暴露太多心迹的枝条。最后，你所看到的一种美：既朦胧又单薄美得多么虚伪，美得莫名其妙。 _批评的是呀！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2009-08-15 02:13:19 Post subject:

刚收到诗集，谢谢月亮。读了一些，喜欢。

雨中垂钓人
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Posted: 2009-08-15 21:25:14 Post subject:

没有起锅的饺子红着眼睛怯怯地跳。森里的神秘是心中的悟。美好看得见，也感觉得到。

爱月
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Posted: 2009-08-16 00:13:52 Post subject:

一首诗被反复修改：先砍掉所有的刺，再磨圆所有棱角有同样的感觉。 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

若尘
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Posted: 2009-08-16 03:20:52 Post subject:

一首诗被反复修改：先砍掉所有的刺，再磨圆所有棱角然后剪掉暴露太多心迹的枝条。最后，你所看到的一种美：既朦胧又单薄美得多么虚伪，美得莫名其妙。学习精华之作，问好半溪明月。 _________________ 走自己的路，让别人去说吧！

杨光
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Posted: 2009-08-16 05:19:16 Post subject:

《美的虚伪或残缺》一首诗被反复修改：先砍掉所有的刺，再磨圆所有棱角然后剪掉暴露太多心迹的枝条。最后，你所看到的一种美：既朦胧又单薄美得多么虚伪，美得莫名其妙。经典，不仅诗歌如此！ _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

若尘
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Posted: 2009-08-21 14:10:32 Post subject:

学习精华，问好明月。 _________________ 走自己的路，让别人去说吧！

沙漠
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Posted: 2009-08-23 14:30:54 Post subject:

简洁而不简单的三个。拜读学习！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

江南雨
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Posted: 2009-08-23 22:31:07 Post subject:

明月好！诗集今天收到，很精美，妺妹人也很漂亮很精祌。感谢了。第一首诗就吸引了我，很精彩。向你学习了，下来慢慢拜读，远握！有空到陕南来玩。 _________________ 陕西姜华

李运邦
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Posted: 2009-08-29 01:23:32 Post subject:

武老师，您的诗集我今天下午欣喜收到。我会慢慢拜读，心领神通的；再次真诚感谢！ _________________ 闲处携书花下坐，兴来得句竹间吟！

江南雨
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Posted: 2009-08-30 00:12:15 Post subject:

学习精华之作，问好半溪明月。 _________________ 陕西姜华

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