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唐伯虎
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Posted: 2007-03-10 19:27:04 Post subject:

凤舞九天 wrote:

现在七字诗横行，格律诗的推广，看来任重道远啊！ Cool

再来一首, 我醉着呢. 等你的诗醒酒

凤舞九天
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Posted: 2007-03-10 19:28:44 Post subject:

秋香还是许配唐伯虎比较合适，俺是闲人浪子，怕被家室拖累。 _________________ 不需刻意求佳境自有奇逢应平生

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-03-10 19:30:33 Post subject:

唐伯虎 wrote:

凤舞九天 wrote:

现在七字诗横行，格律诗的推广，看来任重道远啊！ Cool

再来一首, 我醉着呢. 等你的诗醒酒

少林小子们打的是醉拳醉棍

你们对的是醉酒醉诗呀

加油呀
Very Happy

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写诗是为了写更好的诗

唐伯虎
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Posted: 2007-03-10 19:36:05 Post subject:

凤舞九天 wrote:

秋香还是许配唐伯虎比较合适，俺是闲人浪子，怕被家室拖累。 Very Happy

秋香是我的, 谁也枪不去. 我再无才她也属于我.
到是佩服你的才气和挚着, 今天也是不打不交, 如不嫌弃, 请接受我这个不愿受束缚的徒弟一拜. 刚才那些搞笑的话还请海涵.
诗歌的推广是要靠大家共同努力, 有些人虽然写的不好, 但重在参与. 常写, 常学就好了

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-03-10 19:49:25 Post subject:

好呀不打不成交我看凤舞九天兄品质超群，才气过人祝贺两位 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

晓松
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Posted: 2007-03-10 19:56:50 Post subject:

凤舞九天 wrote:

秋叶的诗虽自称打油，但却是严格按照格律来写的，唐伯虎等其他人的则都不行。
戴玨的不错，不过用的应该是平水韵。
个人认为，参赛者的水平并不重要，贵在参与，重要的是评委的水准一定要过关。近体诗的难度在于它有格式格律，而且要严格按照它来写，在这一点上不应有任何妥协的余地。一首平仄不过关，韵脚不入律的诗，即便造词遣句再高妙，也不能拿来跟有严格限制的律诗论高低；因为这极其不公平，诱使作者舍格律弃难就易，在这种文化遗产的传承方面雪上加霜，同时也违背了主办者弘扬中华文化的原旨。
一点建议，欢迎批评指教。 Cool

凤舞兄说的没错，我赞同。
秋叶咱比不了，最欣赏他那“游子行吟荆路开”的“荆路”二字，象是信手拈来又极为贴切，可以说，我上面所有的句子加起来不抵这二字。
我写诗（也可以不叫诗）就图个快活，顾不上许多。只是二十八，五十六字数不会错。

晓松
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Posted: 2007-03-10 20:12:52 Post subject:

二位请慢走！为了秋香也登台，唐寅凤舞且让开；醉酒醉拳咱也会，不信哪个接招来？

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-10 20:23:15 Post subject:

哈，来了个挑战者，重开战局谁赢谁做版主啦 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

花漫天
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Posted: 2007-03-10 20:23:45 Post subject:

加油加油晓松大哥加油 _________________ 我要烦你一辈子，因为我爱你

凤舞九天
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Posted: 2007-03-10 20:29:14 Post subject:

即如此，就再和一首吧！有感于诸位风流香艳，还是一首仄起七绝：月下拥壶醉雀台，天香国色伴君开。高歌一曲酬新客，玉骨冰肌入句来。 _________________ 不需刻意求佳境自有奇逢应平生

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-10 20:31:37 Post subject:

热闹了, 既然PEACE今天是比武招版主, 我也观观战. 晓松, 你和这唐朝风流才子的还有那凤凰的好好喝一阵.看你们谁能夺了那秋香

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-10 20:47:31 Post subject:

得，我看两位秀才文诌诌的出手不俗都是像貌堂堂的，这可是为难我了，就这么一位秋香，该许配谁呢还是要请秋香出来，自己说话，看到底中意哪位俊杰了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

晓松
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Posted: 2007-03-10 20:51:15 Post subject:

凤舞师兄来对台，一杯薄酒为君开；我辈不是风流客，不为秋香为何来？

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-10 21:01:25 Post subject:

WOW, 晓松豪爽. 这唐兄去哪了, 不是带着秋香偷跑了吧. PEACE, 你执法不严啊.

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-10 21:04:32 Post subject:

本为秋香来登台，居士风流双弓开如今唐凤已退去，遥见秋香孤影来 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-03-10 21:09:22 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

WOW, 晓松豪爽. 这唐兄去哪了, 不是带着秋香偷跑了吧. PEACE, 你执法不严啊. Wink

可怜那个秋香，空有红颜如玉呀
却不见了打擂台的人
noooo

白水
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Posted: 2007-03-10 21:14:28 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

本为秋香来登台，居士风流双弓开
如今唐凤已退去，遥见秋香孤影来

哈, 晓松, 凤凰. 秋香终于来了. 看看是国色天香吗?

晓松
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Posted: 2007-03-10 21:18:03 Post subject:

这二位仁兄有章有法，有板有眼，不像我。秋香我也不想了，还是佳人配才子吧。

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-03-10 21:21:57 Post subject:

_________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

和平岛
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Posted: 2007-03-10 21:25:44 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

这二位仁兄有章有法，有板有眼，不像我。

不为秋香为何来？

晓松豪情满怀，诗歌里可见一股非凡的气质
值得称道
是位热血满腔的好男儿呀
Very Happy

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