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己丑六月初一日蚀
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PostPosted: 2009-07-24 02:23:32    Post subject: 己丑六月初一日蚀 Reply with quote

己丑六月初一日蚀

玉兔金乌两象重, 遥看一线三点通。
初亏巧作娥眉月, 食甚全消赤盖容。
百鸟归巢惊日暮, 万民坐地赞天工。
有缘正是留连处, 但见生光又火红。


注 初亏、食甚、生光均为蚀象。赤盖即太阳。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2009-07-24 15:52:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

读老山日食诗,有身临其境之感.几百年的天象奇观,值得以诗记之.
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胡恢宗
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 23:23:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

巧吟天象美,诗笔有神工。
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米运刚
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 01:29:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

成都一线是观日食的好位置,可惜当日到了北海,没看见。五百年一遇,实在遗憾。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-14 20:49:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好黄洋界、胡恢宗、米运刚。谢谢点评。
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