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对雷雨的批评

张南城
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Posted: 2009-08-10 23:58:28 Post subject: 对雷雨的批评

对雷雨的批评浓烈的乌云以无限神奇的身姿翻卷奔涌状如脑絮苍穹低垂大气重凝天使翅膀不能飞翔了宇宙上下只等待雷雨的哲学命题是因为此刻天需要思考天沉闷的思绪压榨着我每一处感觉关闭了所有思想的门雷鸣把结果催下落地时随即也通畅了语言的溪流和雨一齐从脑海中飞出的是对雷雨的批评天在思考时便不准我思想了

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Posted: 2009-08-11 04:21:38 Post subject:

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Posted: 2009-08-11 22:21:38 Post subject:

感谢朋友的阅读和评论。祝好。

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