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《好望角的黑男孩》(外1首)
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 20:21:48    Post subject: 《好望角的黑男孩》(外1首) Reply with quote

《好望角的黑男孩》(外1首)
·迪拜·


好望角,挣扎过多少心愿
黑皮肤的国家领袖诞生后
肤色,不再是个问题

好望角,生长了多少希望
两个男孩手拉着手宣誓结婚后
能与谁相爱,不再是个问题

在好望角,我继续寻找我的男孩
而我,则是他的男孩
安详于他的容颜,我愿爱与被爱


《他是我寻找已久的西班牙男孩》
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他是我寻找已久的西班牙男孩
他美丽,他风流,他的眼眸
是我辗转不能入眠的星辰

来吧,可爱的男人。他对我说
旷野里自由的花儿已经开放
我们去呼吸春天遍地的芳香

来一点酒,来几口烟
瞧我们是多么的幸运,在世界的
冬天里,这里的冰雪早一步融化

是啊,我的男孩,我想深深地吻你
记忆你的美丽
把未来的岁月与它铭刻

看,只有在春色中开放的花儿
配得上你荡漾的笑容,而你酒后脸庞上的
一点红晕是我在人间的苦苦寻觅

假如你在宁静中入睡
我要摘一朵野花
放置在你的脸颊旁,凝聚你的气息

那是一朵我极度渴望的花
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一个人的空间里,我将取出来再回忆
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 20:53:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

异国情调啊 Very Happy
久违。问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 21:49:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!

转换点心情。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 15:10:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

80后的李运邦,前来问候学习,遥握!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-09 21:43:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

断背之恋~~

感情真诚~~就是美好~~

问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 16:28:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢李运邦!

谢谢安红红!

一起探讨。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 22:14:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

最喜欢《他是我寻找已久的西班牙男孩》,
这首诗歌淡化了同性之恋和异性之恋,
能够感受的是流畅的情感表达,
在直抒胸臆中融入生活场景的叙述和描绘,
细腻而真实,
炽热而真挚,
《他是我寻找已久的西班牙男孩》很能够打动心灵的诗歌 !
Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
问好迪拜啊!好久没与你联系了,想念你以前对我们的关心!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 15:07:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!

威海考取大学了吗?

有没有他的消息

和联系?

可以让你的学生在9月中旬前,投一些稿件(在标题注明80后)
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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 17:38:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

陈若祥 wrote:
最喜欢《他是我寻找已久的西班牙男孩》,
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同感,我也比较喜欢这一首。淡化对同性恋描写, 把笔触聚焦于“恋”之情怀,更显其真实,自然。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-12 02:13:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

断背之恋~~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-15 15:34:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

迪拜 wrote:
谢谢!

威海考取大学了吗?

有没有他的消息

和联系?

可以让你的学生在9月中旬前,投一些稿件(在标题注明80后)..


最近没有威海的消息,学生太多记不清他的情况了,不止他录取的学校可满意,今年可走。
以前您发了他的一首在《诗歌在线》,说给他寄去,不只可寄了。您也可以寄到我这儿转交。

抽空发一学生的诗歌过来,希望您多指导。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-15 19:08:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

寄了

说收到。

所以,想知道现在的情况。
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