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80后作品 《煤矿工人》(4首)投6期 问好
沈奕军
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PostPosted: 2009-07-31 05:55:45    Post subject: 80后作品 《煤矿工人》(4首)投6期 问好 Reply with quote

《煤矿工人》(4首)
沈奕军
《祖国的地下》

祖国的地下
隐藏着唐朝的诗篇 宋代的词阙
还有绵延千里的煤源

一群地下工作者
把春天捎到地下
让煤开花

《煤矿工人》

黝黑的脸上
布满岁月的沧桑
遗留的斑痕被风一吹
人就老了

拨开日子
回忆被年龄越压越沉
在看不到天的地下
内心有一盏探照灯
指向远方

《在矿区喝二锅头》

矿区食堂
挤满了刚出井的伙计
我从陕西坐火车到矿区
看望我的老乡

老乡在食堂叫几个家常菜
我把临走时的二锅头打开
几杯下肚
他用一些很专业的英语询问我家乡的情况
很多生僻的单词让我很沮丧

他的变化让我大吃一惊
三年小学学龄的老乡
通过自学
已经是煤矿的主干力量
而我一个名牌大学生
还在四海漂泊流浪

《一列煤车把春天开进村庄》

一列煤车把春天开进村庄
春风吹红了桃花 吹绿了山腰
把邻家的小红吹进了婆家


泥土散发着芳香
秧苗吐露着新芽
白云的尾巴把流水拖到了山前
大片的油菜摇曳着身子
母亲把茶叶摘回了家

我看到
矿区的天空春光灿烂
南方回来的燕子把
春天背上了蓝天




作者简介:沈奕军,男,汉族,陕西汉阴人,生于1985年,一直坚持诗歌散文创作,作品散见与《鸭绿江》、《辽河》、《浙江作家》、《文学与人生》、《青春潮》(原福建青年)、《中国诗歌》、《群岛文学》等数十种刊物,有作品被《5.12网络地震诗文全集》、《中国当代网络诗歌年选》(2008)《嘉陵江诗选》第三卷、《2008中国最佳网络诗歌》等收录,出版小说《彩虹下的初恋》。多次在全国诗歌大赛获奖,现为一些刊物特约编辑。




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PostPosted: 2009-07-31 15:35:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

一个永远沉重而又绕不开的话题。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 09:39:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得真挚感人,第一首新颖。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-03 04:46:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢后两首~~叙事朴实~充满生活意趣~~

问好~
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沈奕军
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 21:22:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

吟啸徐行 wrote:
一个永远沉重而又绕不开的话题。



感谢
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 21:27:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

是当时参赛"桃园"的作品吧,问好.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 16:23:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

艾哈迈德·阿拜 wrote:
写得真挚感人,第一首新颖。
感谢 问好
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 16:25:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
是当时参赛"桃园"的作品吧,问好.
确实这样 你的获一等奖啊 我的枪毙了 呵呵 远握
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 23:16:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

叙事朴实~充满生活意趣~~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 23:52:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组现实性文字,感动对生活的再提炼!问候
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 12:29:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组非常好的诗!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 14:10:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
一组非常好的诗!


同感。这组诗歌好在内涵,从诗歌的内涵可以看到诗人的豁达,乐观,和对社会,对人生认真的思考。然而文字简洁的铺垫又令诗歌跳出了死板的说教。 精
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PostPosted: 2009-09-02 03:09:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常感谢 问好远握
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