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《我在一条路上想念你》(外一首)
90后醉着的佛
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 14:12:17    Post subject: 《我在一条路上想念你》(外一首) Reply with quote

《我在一条路上想念你》


想你了,一个人慢悠悠的在熟悉的路上
灯光昏暗,十字路口的红绿灯交替变换着
我对你的想念从房门口到十字路口都没有听过
我试图和我们都看见过的路灯谈话
很多人是不可亲近的
正如一条即将过十字路口的车突然折回
我就在那刻更加的想念你
不要悲悯,树叶慢慢合拢手掌
我原路折回
想念你到不想了



《隐藏的王》

孤独的时候他喜欢称自己为王
在椅子上动作很乱,一会又静住了
他会无意间发现家具上的一块大玻璃
多了家具一样颜色的透明胶
北面的窗玻璃全部脱离,昨夜大风突袭让他一阵寒冷
折断的木剑,褶皱的宣纸
这些都在书架上,这些都是发生在去年的事情
他扭着头想找出想给你介绍一间屋子里让他感觉安静的东西
让他突然感到一下子很多年过去了
一个感到孤独就叫自己为王的人站在镜子旁看到了自己
这些和他五岁面对镜子呼唤王侯将相是完全不同的
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 15:33:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

真实,自然,逐步走向成熟的年轻。。。。。。不错 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 18:02:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错`能够表达出自已的感受~~

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