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侯 歌
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PostPosted: 2009-08-04 01:02:48    Post subject: 切入 Reply with quote
锋利的，轻轻一划
粒子整齐排列，推开
一道伤口：太阳出来了
疼痛，奇妙的感觉

东西往下掉，卵壁
愔愔里，诞生着方向
最后的密码，正在镶嵌
丛林，羽毛遮掩处

巢穴温暖，感觉之
特征：裹与甜蜜的核
形式其独有；色彩斑斓
夺目，弦音泛起时

恰逢切入，生动的
映衬出背景：巨大的
只是渺小的；而看见的
正被看不见的欺骗

Hg 2009-8-4
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-08-04 12:40:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
哲理, 深刻.
欢迎新朋友.
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侯 歌
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 14:11:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
哲理, 深刻.
欢迎新朋友.
这是一个非常好的氛围，很喜欢！
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 15:21:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜欢就好。盼多于其他朋友交流 ， 周末愉快Very Happy
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侯 歌
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 18:59:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
出来乍到，看到大家写得这么好，真的不敢妄加评论。
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