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浪淘沙 观黄果树瀑布
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PostPosted: 2009-08-02 02:50:44    Post subject: 浪淘沙 观黄果树瀑布 Reply with quote

浪淘沙 观[color=cyan]黄果树瀑布
--和友人词

瀑布泻深渊,

气势冲天。

寒云冷雾罩山间。

应是蚩尤鏖战处,

魂绕千年。


寂谷了无喧,

岁月延绵。

当年战火化炊烟。

放眼黔山皆秀色

沧海桑田。

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PostPosted: 2009-08-02 04:42:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

有气势,富情调!
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笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-02 05:59:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

蒙君夸赞,倍感汗颜,当虚心学习,以求寸进。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-03 16:42:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

秀色可餐,情魂可感。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 00:00:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢光临,请多指教!
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