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七律 己丑夏日隨感六章
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 06:53:18    Post subject: 七律 己丑夏日隨感六章 Reply with quote

七律 己丑夏日隨感六章

之一

嫩寒風緩麥秋天,故國江山六十年。
夢輭清宵慵化蝶,日熙卓午倦聽蟬。
何來妙手開碁局,難得空音辦指弦。
想望霓虹縹緲處,明泉如瀉玉如煙。

之二

碧水泱泱逈古臺,小姑居處絕塵埃。
嵐光呼吸鬚眉綠,爽氣氤氳洞府開。
難越紅牆連廣漢,但教青鳥到蓬萊。
何如六合三千外,返照靈山聽蟄雷。

之三

千仞高崗欲卜廬,百年悲笑入虛無。
懐人風雨停雲賦,弔古江山潑墨圖。
鬱勃澗泉流玉髓,清涼意緒在冰壺。
憑欄生怕魚龍怒,此夕臨淵不敢呼。

之四

年逾耳順此身閑,海水天風自往還。
縹緲沉雲歸遠浦,紛紜掛雨系空山。
憑虛坐忘三心外,離相倘佯五蘊間。
似綺殘霞西日下,疏鐘幾杵到禪關。

之五

夏雲流宕有無中,歸去誅茅海嶠東。
孤榻近窗親夜月,素琴掛壁拂天風。
一簾冷韻琅玕碧,十里温馨菡萏紅。
屴崱振衣舒腷臆,凌虛長嘯入鴻濛。

之六

藏舟幽壑意何如?芥子須彌話子虛。
蕉下莫名誰夢鹿,濠間焉辨我非魚。
橫磯垂釣清江艇,擊缶微吟陋室居。
自許天心渾沌甚,奇肱妙想馭飛車。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 17:03:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

随感六章,寄怀深远.拜读欣赏.

"怀人风雨停云赋,吊古江山泼画图",这一妙联,正是馆主的自我

写照.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 17:05:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

文辞优美,意境深远。读先生诗词,十分享受。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 06:14:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

以律诗论,失粘得厉害。但作者写的辞激句荡,机趣盎然。一路看来,仍属翘楚!最喜“夢輭清宵慵化蝶,日熙卓午倦聽蟬。”.“一簾冷韻琅玕碧,十里温馨菡萏紅。”。“夢輭”一词可爱之极;“一簾冷韻”四字惊为天人,NB!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 06:28:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

孟东还 wrote:
以律诗论,失粘得厉害。但作者写的辞激句荡,机趣盎然。一路看来,仍属翘楚!最喜“夢輭清宵慵化蝶,日熙卓午倦聽蟬。”.“一簾冷韻琅玕碧,十里温馨菡萏紅。”。“夢輭”一词可爱之极;“一簾冷韻”四字惊为天人,NB!


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PostPosted: 2009-08-23 01:31:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

孟东还 wrote:
以律诗论,失粘得厉害。但作者写得辞激句荡,机趣盎然。一路看来,仍属翘楚!最喜“夢輭清宵慵化蝶,日熙卓午倦聽蟬。”.“一簾冷韻琅玕碧,十里温馨菡萏紅。”。“夢輭”一词可爱之极;“一簾冷韻”四字惊为天人,NB!


网上搜到相关的----

一个是古人山寨版的:

宋 陈埴《南雁山》“岩边瀑雪寒侵梦,涧底笙箫冷韵腔。”

一个是《汉典》的例句:

清 李渔 《怜香伴·香咏》:“似小姐这等诗,真有雪胎梅骨冷韵幽香。” 清 冒襄 《影梅庵忆语》:“四时草花竹叶,无不经营絶慧,领略殊清,使冷韵幽香,恆霏微于曲房斗室。”

再一个是今人联对版的:

2008年3月22日小雪儿出联:“冷韵一袭诗句老”


小雪儿的出联亦颇有巧思,但在“一簾冷韻琅玕碧,十里温馨菡萏紅。”面前,似也只能附丽。
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