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一首詩的版主
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PostPosted: 2009-07-21 05:20:01    Post subject: 一首詩的版主 Reply with quote

一首詩的版主


儘管你的文學造旨很爛
亂也不拜碼頭來到我的地盤
引申些個歪七扭八的理論
呸! 呸! 有夠扯虧你想得出來

“只要我喜歡為什麼不可以
你的文學是人生我的人生就不是──?”
文學!我不同意你的話
但我維護你的權利 批判

那些個什麼斑豬牆頭草
替我抱不平誰稀罕
還有那個叫博弈的最混蛋
以為取個筆名就啥都玩

我是無冕的一帖版主
算!算!三四十二這不就十四行寫完。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-21 05:39:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

近再读楚辞,‘悬想代拟‘的文学手法自屈原始。戏作一首。
观察国内的一些网站有感, 与此处无关。一笑置之。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-21 16:02:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

還有那個叫博弈的最混蛋
以為取個筆名就啥都玩

这可是你自己说的哦, 开溜 Razz Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-07-21 23:49:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

我还没全读明白。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-23 05:19:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较尖锐地描绘网帖论战的心态,其实也是鼓励发诗帖的主人褒贬兼容,做好一个帖子的管理如同版主. 任何人给了你意见也代表用了一份心读你的帖子.
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PostPosted: 2009-07-29 16:55:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

博主不要生气,莫测认为你的文本不应该归类诗,是议论文。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-30 05:45:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,或许文本有议论的能量,形式上它还是可以忝列诗类的(畸韵,代拟,十四讽,等等)。
也有朋友读为自嘲的,乱打油的。我不拘泥,你也就别框框,如置之议论文,怕真嫌薄弱了点。 Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: 2009-08-04 03:51:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

你們的詩歌全都比我的好,
我的打油見不得人,
你們又何需過份謙虛.?
你們大家是半斤八兩的高人!
我是八兩中的1/4杯水.
最要緊還是有血有淚.
感人的詩歌才有本領!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-04 10:22:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常 好的诗啊,诗人。
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