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再致听云馆主

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-07-21 18:45:15 Post subject: 再致听云馆主

1907年写了一首小诗送呈馆主,1908年,馆主喜迁多伦多,并与多伦多诗友雅聚,余远隔重洋,惜未能一睹先生风采,于今犹憾然,近观先生玉照及大作,更增仰慕之情,因成是律,敬祈教正. 慧眼观尘世扬清荡垢氛驰怀江海远纵目雪霜欣腕劲勤挥笔心灵巧运斤吟句留雅韵画意最宜君 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-07-27 14:57:08 Post subject:

意深韵远。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-07-27 15:31:49 Post subject:

谢莹雪阅评,问好. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

孟东还
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Posted: 2009-07-28 08:26:36 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

1907年写了一首小诗送呈馆主,1908年,馆主喜迁多伦多,并与多
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敢问黄洋界先生今年一百0多少的高寿？或者只是笔误？

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-07-28 13:37:30 Post subject:

孟东还 wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

1907年写了一首小诗送呈馆主,1908年,馆主喜迁多伦多,并与多
...

敢问黄洋界先生今年一百0多少的高寿？或者只是笔误？

人生如梦，转眼百年。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-07-29 04:52:25 Post subject:

孟君问得好,庆宏圆得妙! 确系糊涂笔误.应是2007和2009之误.抱歉! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

孟东还
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Posted: 2009-07-29 07:13:58 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

孟君问得好,庆宏圆得妙!
确系糊涂笔误.应是2007和2009之误.抱歉!

多谢系铃人解惑，不然我一直在想黄老1907年写那一首小诗时该是几岁呢？

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-08-01 16:58:39 Post subject:

“腕劲勤挥笔心灵巧运斤”妙句佳联，欣赏，问好！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-08-01 17:05:41 Post subject:

谢米兄赏阅,问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

郑达夫
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Posted: 2009-08-01 18:05:46 Post subject:

欣赏学习！ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

369913806
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Posted: 2009-08-02 03:06:43 Post subject:

驰怀江海远纵目雪霜欣.好句，妙到毫巅! _________________ 湘山樵夫

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-08-02 15:17:20 Post subject:

感谢达夫,369兄阅评. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

胡恢宗
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Posted: 2009-08-07 20:18:29 Post subject:

好个“心灵巧运斤”！真乃神来之笔。向老兄学习。 _________________ 水曲云烟绕林深鸟竞飞

孟东还
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Posted: 2009-08-07 21:07:36 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

1907年写了一首小诗送呈馆主,1908年,馆主喜迁多伦多,并与多
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“因成是律”，所以“句”跟“灵”失粘了。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-08-07 22:57:17 Post subject:

谢胡兄点评,谢孟兄指正. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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