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游滕王阁(2009.7.21)
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PostPosted: 2009-07-27 22:12:34    Post subject: 游滕王阁(2009.7.21) Reply with quote

游滕王阁(2009.7.21)

西山横翠,南浦飞云,于水天一色之间,更起群楼疑海市

上出九重,下临无地,自序赋三王而后,我临高阁亦仙人
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PostPosted: 2009-07-27 22:22:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

更起群楼疑海市

我临高阁亦仙人

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PostPosted: 2009-07-27 22:53:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好老山先生,请多指正。

传些照片来:



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PostPosted: 2009-07-28 01:45:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2009-07-28 14:28:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

游滕王阁(2009.7.21)

西山横翠,南浦飞云,于水天一色之间,更起群楼疑海市

上出九重,下临无地,自序赋三王而后,我登高阁亦仙人

发现下联重了“临”字,改作“登”
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