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精神疗法(5首小诗)
雪蛟
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PostPosted: 2009-07-23 16:23:44    Post subject: 精神疗法(5首小诗) Reply with quote

* 日全食

我早已被生活宠坏
未料今天
却被上帝黑了一次

* 洗 澡

像一只搬运生活的蚂蚁
每天风尘仆仆。身体洗净了
而烟尘已入心,我只能昼夜忏悔

* 精神疗法

把一枚石子投进湖中
水波涌动,光阴慢慢开合
一个少年脚踏莲花,手攥红鲤
自彼岸赤裸而来

* 两种美丽

是的
你不能把一个少年
和一只麻雀连在一起
他们各自秘而不宣
麻雀抖动的双翅和少年拉紧的弹弓
是两种不同的美丽

* 区 别

一天到晚在水中周游
咬钩是常有的事。时日已久
唇齿磨得锐利而坚韧

一条鱼和另一条鱼的区别,仅仅在于
是否贪恋那一串诱饵
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-07-24 14:07:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

*两种美丽

是的
你不能把一个少年
和一只麻雀连在一起
他们各自秘而不宣
麻雀抖动的双翅和少年拉紧的弹弓
是两种不同的美丽

* 区 别

一天到晚在水中周游
咬钩是常有的事。时日已久
唇齿磨得锐利而坚韧

一条鱼和我的区别,仅仅在于
是否贪恋那一串诱饵


哲理, 睿智
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博弈
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Joined: 21 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: 2009-07-24 15:28:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

精神疗法 脱俗,喜欢这个角度。
这个红鲤可谓超越了禅。不错!
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(在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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雪蛟
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PostPosted: 2009-07-26 16:27:17    Post subject: 问好白水,谢谢关注~~ Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
*两种美丽
...
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雪蛟
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PostPosted: 2009-07-26 16:28:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
精神疗法 脱俗,喜欢这个角度。
这个红鲤可谓超越了禅。不错!


博弈好,远握!
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