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我咬夜
花中搂月
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Joined: 24 Jul 2009
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Location: 江苏省淮安市楚州区教育局
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PostPosted: 2009-07-25 13:58:17    Post subject: 我咬夜 Reply with quote

我咬夜
作者:花中搂月

深夜 诗绪醒来
像虫子似地 咬我

痛得我 张大嘴巴
去咬夜

在夜的身体里
我是很痛的虫子
月亮也是很痛的虫子
脸色常受情绪左右

情绪的涨落
引起夜的警惕
夜咬我时
根本不要动一下嘴巴

邮编:223200
地址:江苏省淮安市楚州区教育局
原名:陈秀荣
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-07-26 03:10:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

生动,写实, 活灵活现
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