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两位环卫工

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2009-07-22 15:51:07 Post subject: 两位环卫工

两位环卫工文/ 山城子绿底花衫马尾巴辫儿两位大体相同一前一后楼下大院创造干净的心情她们作为客观存在成了我一种美的反映很想告知：她们的劳动正做客我的诗中 2009-7-21 于贵阳市金阳新区 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

张建文
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Posted: 2009-07-22 16:04:29 Post subject:

创造干净的心情 ——一语中的，把环卫工人的劳动本质概括的极其精到！

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-22 17:31:46 Post subject:

不错的着墨点，问好老师

山城子
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Posted: 2009-07-24 16:52:20 Post subject:

谢谢两位朋友简评！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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