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一个人(组诗)
高兴涛
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Joined: 02 Jun 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 17:13:24    Post subject: 一个人(组诗) Reply with quote

一个人(组诗)



一个人走着,一个人写作,一个人就是一个人的生活。


                  -----题记

一个人


想把自己比喻为鸟
却走在地上。听着脚底板的声音
雪的声音,有三尺多厚
压在,鸟的声带。这些年
奇怪的,都泡在水里,喝下------
还不到3年,走路的样子
就像个诗人



楼上


没有什么,这黑夜居所
灯火,屏着呼吸
我不再拿想象
推翻直觉。如果,有一个女人
站在楼下,很多情节
可能都是假想的、类似的------



忧郁


这抒情走在路上
像没有脚的鸟,疲惫而欢快
我发现,天空是跑着的
看着我,成了植物



回忆


把忧郁混在米汤里
时常想起,过去的事
在晚上,读诗的女人来了
我希望时间,能像脚印一样
如果,再打个盹儿
米汤就更甜了



在雪中


雪润大地,润湿眼睛
就润湿了灾难。这时,街道空着
这时,即使有乌鸦飞来,也填补不了
树木的黑



2006年3月
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司马策风
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Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 21:55:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

较喜欢《回忆 》和《在雪中》较有诗味。

欢迎你光临北美枫
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 21:56:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

雪的声音,有三尺多厚
压在,鸟的声带

很美


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