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教师，这个群体（整理一组）

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-06-28 01:56:35 Post subject: 教师，这个群体（整理一组）

1 你照看多年苗圃，你已经明了无奈无法掌控的，除了禾苗还有阳光、土壤，肥料、水分丈量不能避免，同样不能避免那些临时揠苗也不能助长的数字无法让每个数字都便于描画春天你怕听电话铃响怕自己张口的寒冷，冻结越冬候鸟一年跋涉衔回的幸福 2 我现在，我越来越确定如果我不在意草木良莠如果我能像无声润物的春雨或者柔媚鸟语的春阳我也会滋润，也会灿烂因为，那些粉笔灰溅起的渴望那些唇舌里迸绽的开花声都是我的雨露，都是我的阳光 3 她承担着子宫的职责没有人当她是母亲她只是培养箱，只是苗圃从春天开始那些千差万别的种子带着千差万别的希望一茬接一茬地来又一茬接一茬地走她倾其所有的满足耗空了自己，冰冷了自己繁茂与高大，向来只属于染色体，属于立足的土地她不是母亲，也不是家园冬雪覆盖的时候她一无所有地荒凉着

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-06-28 02:26:47 Post subject:

写出了一个老师高洁的情怀~问好荷梦！

白水
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Posted: 2009-06-28 04:45:29 Post subject:

感悟甚深，荷梦也是教师职业吗？

上城
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Posted: 2009-06-29 09:28:47 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

感悟甚深，荷梦也是教师职业吗？

什么科目？
_________________
每个诗人都很重要

上城
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Posted: 2009-06-29 09:32:53 Post subject:

社会对教师有很多不切实际的想法，也很不公平 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

荷梦
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Posted: 2009-07-08 03:01:20 Post subject:

问候明月，白水，上城！谢谢评读。是的，荷梦是一乡村教师。

安红红
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Posted: 2009-07-08 18:44:32 Post subject:

问好~~已读~~教师是高尚的职业~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2009-07-10 02:49:27 Post subject:

詩題太白了，改一改詩題，增加一點耐人尋味。 _________________ 香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄： http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html 魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

白水
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Posted: 2009-07-10 13:22:49 Post subject:

魏鵬展 wrote:

詩題太白了，改一改詩題，增加一點耐人尋味。

荷梦，我也有同感，以你的文笔的确可以更好些。

李有明
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Posted: 2009-07-10 18:05:38 Post subject:

谢谢你对老师这么高的情怀！

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-07-11 03:57:27 Post subject:

问候老师!! _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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