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五花石

山桃花
童生

Joined: 16 May 2009
Posts: 81

山桃花Collection

Posted: 2009-07-08 18:27:47 Post subject: 五花石

◎镜子旁的女人从未戴过一朵花梨花开时，只是远远隔着春天嗅了嗅一枚蓝色纽扣，按不住一纸月色，木鱼敲碎镜子入坐的人，藕断丝连她描眉，画唇，覆盖今夜的流水声 ◎今夜很安静真好枫将她放牧，青草的气息犹如情人羊安静，马安静，月亮安静她掏出体内的海沙滩柔软，鱼鳃鲜红它的呼吸开出小小的水花 ◎意外错位的冲刺路，开始滴血绕道，人，善。脸的背后后备胎繁殖铜锈，谁也追不上一场变异的夺路而逃她抓着一朵尾气，爬在城市边缘，盯紧一瓣瓣深蓝的雪花 ◎下次记得爱下次，一定记得放下簸箕，扫帚放下手中的饭碗，化妆品放下孩子的尿布，枣红马，小蚂蚁放下云淡风轻，月亮，船，诗经，蒹葭放下一株小草，白蝴蝶，一朵红莲放下霓虹，鼠标，熄灭江湖，删掉恩怨回家可这一切都已晚了，那一天除了祖父，和午后的春雨我什么都不缺 ◎碎瓷她又开始和自己吵了一只西红柿更加成熟豆角，茄子，城市的叫卖倾轧，催化剂无色无味连阴雨不卑不亢，对于伤口意味着一场围剿骨质瓷连根拔起出殡的鞭炮，唢呐，洋鼓，洋号麻衣生出假慈悲一只叭儿狗卷卷尾巴翡翠缴枪，吃掉一半的白菜，玉米羹改道而行她看看伤口 ——它总会自行了断的

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2009-07-09 04:19:30 Post subject:

下次，一定记得放下簸箕，扫帚放下手中的饭碗，化妆品放下孩子的尿布，枣红马，小蚂蚁放下云淡风轻，月亮，船，诗经，蒹葭放下一株小草，白蝴蝶，一朵红莲放下霓虹，鼠标，熄灭江湖，删掉恩怨回家可这一切都已晚了，那一天除了祖父，和午后的春雨我什么都不缺 .....有特质的一组,提上.

湮雨朦朦
秀才

Joined: 18 May 2009
Posts: 213
Location: 江西省南昌市
湮雨朦朦Collection

Posted: 2009-07-09 15:41:42 Post subject:

真喜欢桃花的诗歌.

魏鵬展
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Joined: 14 Apr 2009
Posts: 606
Location: Hong Kong 香港
魏鵬展Collection

Posted: 2009-07-09 16:18:13 Post subject:

仔細讀過了。 _________________ 香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄： http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html 魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

荷梦
进士出身

Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
荷梦Collection

Posted: 2009-07-09 16:52:52 Post subject:

真是非同寻常的诗歌，喜欢！

马列福
童生

Joined: 27 May 2009
Posts: 35

马列福Collection

Posted: 2009-07-10 00:00:38 Post subject:

好，非常好

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
Posts: 627
Location: 中国陕西省
江南雨Collection

Posted: 2009-07-10 01:21:32 Post subject:

有特质的一组,提上. _________________ 陕西姜华

山桃花
童生

Joined: 16 May 2009
Posts: 81

山桃花Collection

Posted: 2009-07-10 02:27:12 Post subject:

谢谢赵老师，江南，马列，烟雨，鹏展的阅读和鼓励。问候北美枫的朋友们！

沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
沙漠Collection

Posted: 2009-07-10 03:51:13 Post subject:

有阅读的快感！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

韩少君
进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
韩少君Collection

Posted: 2009-07-10 11:06:34 Post subject:

好好好！！！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

骨笛
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Joined: 03 Jan 2009
Posts: 547

骨笛Collection

Posted: 2009-07-11 03:48:02 Post subject:

她看看伤口它总会自行了断的 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

遛达的七七
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Joined: 07 Jun 2006
Posts: 329

遛达的七七Collection

Posted: 2009-07-11 22:19:34 Post subject:

碎瓷不错

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
Posts: 627
Location: 中国陕西省
江南雨Collection

Posted: 2009-07-12 03:17:35 Post subject:

有特质的一组,提上. _________________ 陕西姜华

东江湖主
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Joined: 10 Aug 2008
Posts: 115

东江湖主Collection

Posted: 2009-07-12 16:24:36 Post subject:

欣赏，问好！

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
Posts: 627
Location: 中国陕西省
江南雨Collection

Posted: 2009-07-13 13:52:02 Post subject:

喜欢桃花的诗歌. _________________ 陕西姜华

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2009-08-03 23:57:36 Post subject:

呵呵，提上来~ 有个问题不明白，山桃花和你是一个人吧？

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2009-08-04 10:31:08 Post subject:

的确不错！！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

袁春春
童生

Joined: 02 Aug 2009
Posts: 15

袁春春Collection

Posted: 2009-08-04 11:55:45 Post subject:

下次，一定记得可这一切都已晚了无法弥补的缺憾。。。。。。

江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
Posts: 627
Location: 中国陕西省
江南雨Collection

Posted: 2009-08-06 23:19:18 Post subject:

喜欢桃花的诗歌. _________________ 陕西姜华

一品红
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Joined: 13 Jun 2009
Posts: 330

一品红Collection

Posted: 2009-08-07 04:09:29 Post subject:

喜欢,提上. _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

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