A Full Moon Night.

[sfiawong]

A Full Moon Night.

Watching the moon of a pale white lantern
as I thought my mom was in the moon.
Dreaming myself riding a space-ship to my home town,
As I passed through the oceans and mountains.
Why I see my father is thinking deeply?
My daughter’s children are smiling with happiness?
Immediately I felt myself with a line of grand-children
Recalled my memory for my children playing fire works,
We entered the Victoria Garden in the Moon Festival.
Are you still sleeping in your dream?
You should believe I am always staying by your side.
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有評必回應.
Love your relatives and friends when they are near you.
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[William Zhou周道模]

Maybe the word "as" on the second line and on the forth line are not needed.

Can we say "why I see" ?
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
周道模

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