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投稿:辽河湿地物语(选三)

蓝花伞
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Posted: 2009-07-01 22:36:14 Post subject: 投稿:辽河湿地物语(选三)

湿地物语组诗蓝花伞青蛙对唱这边大提琴上的几个短音象一个个小铲子向泥里顿去那边小号紧跟着溜达出一串串滑音随即长号也象五月的野草一样长起来池塘就象要开锅声音的泡泡此起彼伏被裹挟着似乎我成了其中嗓门最亮的那只可只能保持悄悄突然苇笛飘了进来我一抬头原来是一只鹳鸟有些害羞的剪影漪音一样一晃而过午夜小鸟的叫一茎茅草从午夜的静中颤微微地探出一声二声三声一只小鸟的叫让湿地竖起了耳朵开始是长调接下来就跌进了弹性音组细小的渴望和焦虑一波一波迎着初春的风最后在钢琴最右侧的几个键上滑入水的空茫正是候鸟迁徙的时节正是月亮汪汪的夜是在天空低徊落在一捧干草上还是楼顶她应该有细长的腿尖尖的喙白白的羽衣苇荡复调作业机的嗡鸣是低声部水鸟的合唱似乎在其荫庇中生长一段段一组组音乐的碎片互相叠加连缀应和苇荡在声音的海上起伏摇晃布谷鸟不时地跃上旋律的顶端领唱紧跟着莫名的小鸟用竹笛来一串下行音节如一把小石片削向水面一两声油管起落重金属的不和谐似乎也是这里不可缺少的一部分此刻天空把耳朵低低伏下来我的心软如一方风中的锦缎如果不是身边的同事我真想也加入这场合唱以一只久不出声大鸟的肺活量作者:盛军邮编:124109 地址:辽宁盘锦辽河油田曙采工艺研究所[/code]

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Posted: 2009-07-04 05:22:01 Post subject:

提起来

杨海军
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Posted: 2009-07-04 12:38:19 Post subject:

这个很质感。问候诗人！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2009-07-04 16:48:40 Post subject:

最近学拉二胡，这些声音类的很敏感~~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

蓝花伞
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Posted: 2009-07-05 20:30:55 Post subject: 谢谢白水,谢谢安红红的临来,多批!

谢谢白水,谢谢安红红的临来,多批!

蓝花伞
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Posted: 2009-07-05 20:32:01 Post subject: 感谢杨海军的品读!夏日好!

感谢杨海军的品读!夏日好!

山城子
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Posted: 2009-07-06 14:12:42 Post subject:

亲切!！！！！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

江南雨
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Posted: 2009-07-06 14:42:36 Post subject:

很质感。问候诗人！！！ _________________ 陕西姜华

山桃花
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Posted: 2009-07-06 18:56:37 Post subject:

细腻的一组！蓝花伞好！

蓝花伞
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Posted: 2009-07-06 20:04:26 Post subject: 问好老乡!夏日清凉!

山城子 wrote:

亲切!！！！！！

蓝花伞
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Posted: 2009-07-06 20:05:30 Post subject: 谢谢江南雨来读!

谢谢江南雨来读!

蓝花伞
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Posted: 2009-07-06 20:08:46 Post subject: 问好山桃花!喜欢你的诗歌!

问好山桃花!喜欢你的诗歌!

蓝花伞
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Posted: 2009-07-08 20:55:14 Post subject: 致意白水,多批评!

白水 Moonlight wrote:

提起来

江南雨
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Posted: 2009-07-10 01:26:23 Post subject:

细腻的一组！蓝花伞好！ _________________ 陕西姜华

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