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投稿:雨中，我来探访
云冰之南
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PostPosted: 2009-07-04 15:46:08    Post subject: 投稿:雨中，我来探访 Reply with quote
雨中，我来探访

看你，你的窗台布展出雾蒙中的青山
说是远看不清，其实，近看更难
紫薇开了半个多月，就这庭院
我出入上下车门、房门，未曾移一步向前

近来整个南方暴雨，紫薇花前更甚
花瓣落了不少，留在枝叶的，悬挂阵阵隐痛
就像你的痛钻进碎裂的肋骨里面，扶你
站起，却摸不到伤口

2009.7.4
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PostPosted: 2009-07-04 16:22:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗意的题目。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-04 16:43:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
已读~问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-07-07 02:26:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
感谢留言!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-07 16:32:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
近来整个南方暴雨，紫薇花前更甚
花瓣落了不少，留在枝叶的，悬挂阵阵隐痛
就像你的痛钻进碎裂的肋骨里面，扶你
站起，却摸不到伤口


今天在电视上看暴雨还在下，take care.
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