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生日书(二首)
流泉
童生


Joined: 25 Jun 2009
Posts: 62

流泉Collection
PostPosted: 2009-07-04 14:13:21    Post subject: 生日书(二首) Reply with quote

文/流泉


生日书

一声啼哭
化作额头上一缕小小的寂寞
那些水边的风
那些头顶的白云
那些山坡上吹不走的花朵与羊群
像老照片,温馨,柔软
那些爱恋,那些关怀,
那些小木马上嘎吱作响的青涩与浪漫
像五月的麦芒
吐露经久的光

我的手心里,爬满了蚂蚁的痛
一次又一次的呼唤
是两指间长长的烟卷
当所有的幸福燃烧,只剩下一个黄金色的
过滤嘴
滤去的,不仅仅是生活
留下的
也并非兔子的孤独


兔子

兔子吃草,兔子也长膘
兔子的尾巴
总也长不了
就像我苦心种植的花朵
施了一生的肥
灌溉了一生美好
最后,小南风一吹,还是枯萎了
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection
PostPosted: 2009-07-04 16:09:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

兔子

兔子吃草,兔子也长膘
兔子的尾巴
总也长不了
就像我苦心种植的花朵
施了一生的肥
灌溉了一生美好
最后,小南风一吹,还是枯萎了
...写的自如而有回味.
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安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

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PostPosted: 2009-07-04 16:46:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

兔子

兔子吃草,兔子也长膘
兔子的尾巴
总也长不了
就像我苦心种植的花朵
施了一生的肥
灌溉了一生美好
最后,小南风一吹,还是枯萎了


这个,就要后面的几句也许更好,别和兔子扯上关系~~ Smile 浅见,问好~

我苦心种植的花朵
施了一生的肥
灌溉了一生美好
最后,小南风一吹,还是枯萎了
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