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浑然天成《漯河赋》
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 05:58:33    Post subject: 浑然天成《漯河赋》 Reply with quote

浑然天成《漯河赋》
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赋形式上非诗非文,但具有诗文的许多特点,是诗文的混血儿,是诗文的综合体。《漯河赋》全篇五段仅二十五句,形制短小;语句清丽流畅,没有丝毫夸饰堆砌;抒写漯河的古往今来,方方面面,个性鲜明,似天工神韵,浑然天成。
从《漯河赋》中可看出作者文贯古今,思接千载,纵笔开阖,磅礴之气跃然纸上。第一段点题贴切美妙,不落俗套,浩气冲天。你看:“漯河,因水得名,依水而兴。沙澧东去,通江达海;天赐螺湾,两水相融。”四六句用的恰切不过,不同凡响,如“傲处中原之中,四方辅凑;汇集南北之萃,物阜民丰。”同时气势不凡,时空转换也恰到好处,如“遥想当年,水旱码头竞走千帆;喜看今朝,新世纪都邑又显风流。”古今繁华一笔囊括,今昔历史一句尽显风流!
第二段铺张扬厉,浓彩重笔描写古代漯河的光辉人物、典故竟达十二处之多,壮丽的语句述说了漯河灿烂悠久的历史,展示了漯河厚重的文化底蕴。不论是舞阳贾湖出土的9000年前的七音古笛,还是公元220年的三绝碑和公元584年的天下第一商桥;不论是孔子周游列国讲学的归村,还是公元前656年的召陵之盟;不论是公元前201年封侯舞阳的樊哙,还是伟大的文字学家《说文解字》作者许慎;不论是《满江红》的作者爱国英雄岳飞,还是唐玄宗时期的公孙大娘,甚至抗日胜利后的受降亭等,无不说明漯河闪烁古今的光辉历史。
《漯河赋》第三段状物为主,重点描写漯河秀丽可餐的景色,让人美不胜收,一来就留恋忘返。精妙佳句,俯拾皆是,花虫鸟鱼,尽在笔端。比如“放眼望去,玉带缓流,浆动鱼跃,莺啼燕鸣。野鸭时隐时现,沙鸥频频飞翔”,把鱼、鸟、鸭、鸥刻画得惟妙惟肖,如在眼前,嬉戏,飞翔••••••真让人觉得“虽处闹市,仍享田园之乐,更似身处仙境!”
第四段着重状写漯河现代人美丽的都市生活以及漯河近年来取得的荣誉和佳绩,给人昂扬向上的动力,使人们为漯河的当今辉煌而自豪!
最后一段“祝福漯河前程锦绣,福祉永恒!”简短一句,言简意赅,精炼之笔,却让人回味无穷。由衷表达了作者的美好愿望和热爱漯河大地的浓情蜜意!
总的来说,《漯河赋》吸取了汉朝左思《三都赋》等赋的精华,优点有三:一是内容丰博,详尽而细致地描写了漯河的古今典故、地理风情、琴棋歌舞、重要人物。二是精心锤炼语言,辞藻壮丽,下笔琳琅。三是以求实精神创新创作,贴近基层,贴近生活,贴近大众,,不愧是赋中上品,妙思佳构,典范之作。
该赋不论抒情咏史还是写景状物,均烩于一炉,情深而辞工,用典密而切,音韵和谐流畅,值得学习。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-30 16:04:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2009-07-04 04:32:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

附上《漯河赋》来欣赏就更好了!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-09 03:45:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

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附上《漯河赋》来欣赏就更好了!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-10 04:38:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2009-07-10 16:48:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

赋體文已甚少見,難得一讀:浑然天成《漯河赋》,增廣見聞開心竅.欣賞了.
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PostPosted: 2009-07-15 03:43:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

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赋體文已甚少見,難得一讀:浑然天成《漯河赋》,增廣見聞開心竅.欣賞了.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-01 17:05:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

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赋體文已甚少見,難得一讀:浑然天成《漯河赋》,增廣見聞開心竅.欣賞了.
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