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后边以及密码(外一首)
韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-06-30 04:01:56    Post subject: 后边以及密码(外一首) Reply with quote

后边以及密码


后边还有谁
后边是密码和密码的时代

位数添加化 组合复杂化
每个人 都是一堆密码
日记 U盘 文件夹
锁孔 指甲 瞳仁里都有

你是个体的人
但我把你看做一个组织
意志的组织 情感的组织 肉体的组织

归属感 来自忠诚和单线联系
来自密码后边的声音----houbian

后边不再有誓言
誓言是单行线
多一条都是乱码

密码太多
把自己都忘记了

后边的事情
就是把普遍现象
转化成特殊关系
后边不可把握
只可感知

关于后边 你不要回头
愉悦、快乐的密码都会消解

最后你会明白
你的后边
只有我



二十年后的其中一幕


遍地老人的乡村
遍地老人的城市
遍地老人的田垄、企业、机关
青春和朝气成了珍稀动物
迎面是颤巍巍的拐杖回头是咳嗽和喘息

老领导 老同志老朋友 老情妇 老诗人
老膝盖 老手脚老脑袋 老笑容 老灵魂

老年公寓 老人浴池老行旅馆 老饮酒吧
老招待老妓女和更老的老鸨
老脚鞋店 老胃粥铺老春药房
老字招牌成为时髦项目和流行商业
鲜活的少儿只做家庭乃至人间的宠物和佐料

公交、影院、农民的墙根工人的街市
摆满了老象棋 老扑克老麻将 老板凳 老椅子

高血压 脑梗塞帕金森 老年痴呆
血糖 尿糖 加号阳转阴
一个绊脚的时代不可避免地到来

我想提前备足安乐的药品
领着一个看上去比我更老的女人
在拥挤不堪的场院、公园或社区
做一场自杀救国造福子孙的深刻报告
然后当场服食再携手慢慢离去。。。。。。

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PostPosted: 2009-07-03 17:46:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

生活的反思
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江南雨
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PostPosted: 2009-07-04 01:57:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

我想提前备足安乐的药品
领着一个看上去比我更老的女人
在拥挤不堪的场院、公园或社区
做一场自杀救国造福子孙的深刻报告
然后当场服食再携手慢慢离去。。。。。。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-05 18:38:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

二十年后的其中一幕
很大样!值得深思!学习
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 17:52:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢白水 江南雨 地衣树

问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 18:33:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

二十年后的其中一幕

把我带回了二十年前。。的其中一梦 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 21:33:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

20年后,我已做好准备。嘿嘿。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-07 03:48:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

深刻的生活反思,问好少君兄!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-07 05:51:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

反思的2首.
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PostPosted: 2009-07-08 20:57:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有现实感,学习!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-10 01:24:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

深刻的生活反思,问好少君兄!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-11 21:54:41    Post subject: ! Reply with quote

hou bian
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PostPosted: 2009-07-12 12:29:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵二十年後很長的歲月,
整個城市都可以重建了.
還差在一個我麼?

把我獻出去又如何?
我的生命不再重要了,
當要我保維國家的時候!

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PostPosted: 2009-07-13 13:52:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

二十年后的其中一幕
很大样!值得深思!学习
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