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【原创】梦游.鬼城 (外一首)
刘绍华
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PostPosted: 2009-06-24 04:23:05    Post subject: 【原创】梦游.鬼城 (外一首) Reply with quote

【原创】梦游.鬼城 (外一首)

奈何桥上如之奈何
桥边 差点就湿了鞋子
在鬼蜮逛街 很冷
险些迷路 惊出的冷汗凝结成冰
才知道 自己还攥在自己的手心里

街灯神秘 闪烁诡异的眼神儿
拥挤在嘈杂的声音里
形形色色的幽魂出没着
却没有什么隐蔽
磊落地公示在你的面前

鬼蜮也有特权 等级
鬼蜮也有阴暗
好象远离阳谋
鬼蜮很冷 鬼蜮很真……

【原创】关键在于形象工程

好气派 真够神气十足了
一排排硕大的牌坊
如桂冠 矗立头顶
淼淼的如在云端里 飘飘忽忽
让人晕眩 令多少贞洁烈女
投来钦羡的目光

是夜 我的目光不期与你相遇
梦里 缘来你是我前生的情人
于夜色幽谧的花园里欢愉
我 惊愕
你说:“没什么
关键在于形象工程……”

个人简介:刘绍华,男,87年创作并发表作品,05年涉足网络,并进行网络诗歌创作,(网名:风动云动)。先后在《辽河石油报》、《盘锦日报》、《中国石油报》、《当代诗歌》、《北京诗报》、《文艺家》、《黔溪文学》、《诗友》、《华夏诗人》、《银河》、《回归》、《诗文杂志》、《红海滩》、《诗潮》、《辽河》等三十多家报刊、杂志发表二百余篇(首),有作品获奖和入选诗集,著诗集《飞翔的梦》出版。盘锦市作家协会会员。
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2009-06-24 13:38:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

有批判意义的2首.
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刘绍华
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PostPosted: 2009-07-01 18:23:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
有批判意义的2首.


多谢赵老师评点。问好远握!
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刘绍华
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PostPosted: 2009-07-17 16:30:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

自己提下哦!
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PostPosted: 2009-07-17 23:17:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

再批判的明朗些~~

问好~
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刘绍华
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PostPosted: 2009-09-12 02:15:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
再批判的明朗些~~

问好~


感谢朋友品读与建议。问好!多帮助哦!
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