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寥落的一组
闻风
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Joined: 07 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-03-08 05:13:20    Post subject: 寥落的一组 Reply with quote

1

我且把一朵玫瑰抱在怀里
看那些锋利的骨头 硌疼手指
看那些循着香气来的蜂噬咬脖颈
然后一言不发
这是如何的愚蠢啊
一朵花
一串话
一个拥抱
一个死也不肯
叫出来的
名字

2

我要找个地方
你看花正觅着种子
你看柳树 悄悄地发芽
你也让我静静地
静静地
找一片水草
轻轻地
躺下

3

这个世界没有什么可以倾听的
如果说因
因早就注定
如果说果
果在天上 风吹着
砸下来一颗
一定不是
苹果

4

莫名地想流泪
莫名地想把你的名字放在冷风里吹
藏匿在禅音里
仿佛稚嫩的花心儿
虫儿一摸就碎
好想碎啊 碎成
你再也看不见的模样
像我的眼泪
冷风里
不停地吹

5
不肯找到自己
那么就不再有一个名字
迎风舞蹈
也就不再千山万山
一遍一遍
用脚步丈量
那些个月亮啊
一次次升起
一次次
飘落水上

6
要一次生么
给自己一次初升的阳光
从头到脚
照一次透亮
多像
多年前遗失的那片叶子
最近在夜里
一直
长啊长
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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-03-08 06:54:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

好味道!喜欢1、2、6。问好!
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闻风
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PostPosted: 2007-03-08 08:21:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好沙漠,第一次在这里发贴,谢谢你的回复!
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下一个偶像是野兽
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Joined: 16 Jan 2007
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Location: 西安
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PostPosted: 2007-03-08 08:45:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

多年前遗失的那片叶子
最近在夜里
一直
长啊长
---------------------有味道。
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酸风渍衣
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Joined: 06 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-03-08 17:16:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗,有意境。
“莫名地想流泪
莫名地想把你的名字放在冷风里吹 ”有味道。
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闻风
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 05:32:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

下一个偶像是野兽 wrote:
多年前遗失的那片叶子
最近在夜里
一直
长啊长
---------------------有味道。


问好朋友, 多指点啊~~
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闻风
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 05:33:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

酸风渍衣 wrote:
好诗,有意境。
“莫名地想流泪
莫名地想把你的名字放在冷风里吹 ”有味道。


问好酸风,都是风,哈哈哈!
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郦楹
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 06:41:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一次读这些Smile问好闻风
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木容暮又寸
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Posts: 41
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PostPosted: 2007-03-09 23:58:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏!问好!
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闻风
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 05:49:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

郦楹 wrote:
第一次读这些Smile问好闻风

问好郦楹!抱!
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闻风
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PostPosted: 2007-03-10 05:54:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

木容暮又寸 wrote:
欣赏!问好!


问好木容,谢谢阅读!
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kokho
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PostPosted: 2007-03-11 09:37:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

请问 你是秋雁的那位吗?

如果是,那你的诗歌倒是大大向前跨了呢 ;))

。。。
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闻风
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PostPosted: 2007-03-12 05:09:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

kokho wrote:
请问 你是秋雁的那位吗?

如果是,那你的诗歌倒是大大向前跨了呢 ;))

。。。


呵呵,问好,就是原来秋雁的闻风,看到老朋友真的开心!
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