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雨雾都心

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Posted: 2009-06-29 07:54:47 Post subject: 雨雾都心

雨雾都心那雨斜斜的吹打在这个城市从这片落地窗看出去雨势一波波有着它的独特节奏景象是偏黯淡的彩色，与脑波的频率相当这样的色调产生出共鸣，像是一种对话翻阅着灰暗的记忆，寻觅曾经忽略的感觉那在思潮里搅动，落地窗外烟雨迷濛想走过去，轻轻靠在玻璃窗上手掌心贴着它，仿佛我从来不敢去触碰而我从来不敢去触碰，只能隔着一层雨雾让一切都如此朦胧 20090630那天0200 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-06-29 10:25:43 Post subject: 让一切都如此朦胧

好久不见了大作一定要大顶 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2009-06-29 11:28:43 Post subject:

问好，学习，朴素的真理！

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Posted: 2009-06-29 17:31:51 Post subject: 都是下雨惹的祸，还是给些批评指教才是。

上城 wrote:

好久不见了

大作一定要大顶

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Posted: 2009-06-29 17:33:43 Post subject: 谢谢您！

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问好，学习，朴素的真理！

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Posted: 2009-06-29 18:39:15 Post subject:

哟，咋了，真不容易，又开始写诗啦~~ 写的不错哦，对了，你忽略的多了~~~ 过几天再说，等我高兴了就告你~~：）））） _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-06-30 02:49:43 Post subject: 没断过啊！贴出来比较难。

红袖添乱 wrote:

哟，咋了，真不容易，又开始写诗啦~~
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明天不错，是个好日子（七月一日）肯定会有好心情！
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Posted: 2009-07-06 15:13:55 Post subject: 嗨——！

来读这安静的一个

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Posted: 2009-07-07 05:20:17 Post subject: 嗨－－欢迎您来落尘！感谢您说的安静。

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来读这安静的一个

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Posted: 2009-07-08 02:39:49 Post subject:

WOW，又开始贴诗啦，好看～不要停下来～

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Posted: 2009-07-08 04:36:18 Post subject: 回来啦！立正欢迎～

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WOW，又开始贴诗啦，好看～不要停下来～

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Posted: 2009-07-08 17:20:07 Post subject:

我以为多心呢 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2009-07-11 12:44:39 Post subject: 也是多心。

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我以为多心呢

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Posted: 2009-07-14 09:50:10 Post subject:

嗯，什么朦胧了啊，？说说。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2009-07-14 12:25:12 Post subject: 老花了，不朦胧也不行。

苏茉儿 wrote:

嗯，什么朦胧了啊，？说说。

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