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失声的汉诗

钓月
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Posted: 2009-06-27 04:25:31 Post subject: 失声的汉诗

三千年诗火明明灭灭五千载文明勃勃蓬蓬大雁塔下的俑阵黄山迎客的虬松多少诗人朝觐多少骚客吟咏窈窕淑女的歌声兀自河洲淙淙春风杨柳下的叮咛依然飘在千古风中风卷重茅时的叹息还在举着仇恨大弓西装革履的公子御着太平洋的狂风端着一杆破烂洋枪一枪打中汉诗的喉咙唐诗宋词声带断裂近一个世纪又哑又聋复眼在诗行间逡巡悲怆地身陷迷宫燕子美丽的呢喃撬不开冬的囚笼西风夕阳荒径彳亍着少年诗翁 09年6月于钓月小筑[/color][/size] _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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Posted: 2009-06-27 05:09:24 Post subject:

abcd 问好

博弈
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Posted: 2009-06-27 06:06:33 Post subject:

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一枪打中汉诗的喉咙
唐诗宋词声带断裂

且不论真假，这个比喻很有力道，不错的形象。
复眼（暂解为阔而不辨）也有昆虫的博物。
多识花草虫鸟是现代诗人的功课吧。鼓励。
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nobody
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Posted: 2009-06-27 06:34:40 Post subject:

喜欢钓月诗歌的口感。。。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

上城
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Posted: 2009-06-27 14:57:52 Post subject:

恩。好久不见。有点意思 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

何君华
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Posted: 2009-06-27 22:59:29 Post subject:

西风夕阳荒径彳亍着少年诗翁 _________________ 何君华

安红红
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Posted: 2009-06-27 23:11:35 Post subject:

已读~问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

钓月
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Posted: 2009-06-28 04:21:39 Post subject:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]abcd 问好[/quote] 问好白水。好久未见。 _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

钓月
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Posted: 2009-06-28 04:23:22 Post subject:

[quote="博弈"][quote]一枪打中汉诗的喉咙唐诗宋词声带断裂[/quote] 且不论真假，这个比喻很有力道，不错的形象。 ...[/quote] 谢谢鼓励！问好！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

钓月
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Posted: 2009-06-28 04:24:38 Post subject:

[quote="nobody"]喜欢钓月诗歌的口感。。。[/quote] 谢谢朋友的鼓励。：） _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

钓月
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Posted: 2009-06-28 04:26:39 Post subject:

[quote="何君华"]西风夕阳荒径彳亍着少年诗翁[/quote] 用了一下矛盾修辞法。问好！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

钓月
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Posted: 2009-06-28 04:29:25 Post subject:

[quote="安红红"]已读~问好~[/quote] 人生就是过程！不必强调结果。就是有结果，也是人为定义的。也许有价值，也许毫无意义！问好！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

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