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爱月的小点心一组
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PostPosted: 2009-06-21 17:10:38    Post subject: 爱月的小点心一组 Reply with quote

七夕小点心(外六首)

诗歌,诗剧。散文、随笔。以文会友QQ353876638
  诗观:隐秘一种痛,让文字去说吧! 诗者,人乃品性也。在灵魂里种下写诗的信仰;在以后的某一天里我们会获得自由与飞翔!
  
  ————七夕写给思维里意象出的小哥哥
  ◎ 小点心
  
  小哥哥,我把思念的圆
  化为小甜点
  糯米的圆,藏进你的眼
  今天,我看见街头一个小舞女
  会蹦,吃着那些小点心
  哥哥,我把思念的圆
  化为小桌子
  把我的小点心藏在夜里
  傻傻想你......

  
  ◎月亮街
  
  哥哥,今天你在笑吗
  那些月光光的天呐
  有个小魔力弹,击中我的头
  月亮上的小水滴
  哗啦啦落到大街上
  风景很白
  七夕好白,石头花很白
  月亮那些碎银子真白
  我的皮肤因为你也白
  今夜月亮街很好
  哥哥,你好!
  祖国一片大好......
  
  
  ◎小蓝表
  
  哥哥,你个小鬼头
  我想你夜的小蓝表,蹦下叮当心
  我们今天都喜欢上
  蓝月亮里旋转的分秒针
  刺醒黑头发的夜
  
  看着我,走进月亮水里好吗
  你的小才人。水分子
  橡皮弹....小闹表
  还有木头鸟,我爱死它了
  走吧,小哥哥__你拉我的手
  我们就这么走进情人夜
  想你调皮地射中,水镜子玻璃
  我们快点逃......
  
  
  ◎ 象牙链小脚镯
  
  小哥哥,你的梦圆了吗
  某天墨树枝掉进月亮湖了
  你拣到小神女的象牙链吗?
  在七夕蓝口袋里,我喜欢上你
  带有兰梦的腕表
  嗨~~爱就爱上它把我摇进时间
  做一次小情人吧
  你会哭吗?
  我的小脚镯,激动替我喊话
  突然喊出哪一世
  有你的记忆......
  
  
  ◎ 糖衣情人
  
  哥哥,我的小糖衣不见了
  纸鸟它飞走了,牙齿也掉光了
  哥哥,你是云彩里为我出现的小仙子吗
  带来蓝月亮盒子,我需要它们
  完成小夜鸟的理想
  崇拜的人们,为那么多情人带来
  蓝麦的月光......
  我们走进夏日小鸵鸟的梦里
  对着月光说,大片大片白的谎话
  我们都爱听谎话
  不用怀疑它;我们
  就这么笑着掉进情人梦里......

  
  ◎在你蓝色歌声里飞翔
  
  哥哥,七夕的金苹果
  写满月亮的思念
  挂着幽蓝的月光,也缀满兰色诱惑
  我听你歌唱,写下沉醉和未眠
  依然;等待白色沙鸥衔起琴音
  放进七夕月亮的巢穴
  那叮当的水声,掉下月光的孩子
  你唱,我不唱
  我看你写字的手记满疼痛
  空赖的声音里,偶尔你也沉默、
  偶尔放歌,看青草漫溯
  洒满湖水的月光,正荡起星空的浆
  我将在你蓝色歌声里飞翔
  飞往天堂的人
  在自由女神带领下
  偶尔醉成我们的模样

  
  ◎成为你唯一,夜夜七夕
  
  天色已晚,我们都蒙着面具
  避开刀枪剑击,我却残留前世记忆
  听水声哗哗,心事撞击
  撞击铜墙铁壁,火焰掀起热浪
  舞弄谁的裙裾
  
  小哥哥,我在你过去的国度
  穿了一次嫁衣,无人怀疑我虚情假意
  我不知道,今天还能不能找到那个唯一......
  零碎的星空,总怀念深情的月光
  小女人们总思念金色王子
  而我,只想成为你唯一,夜夜七夕
  
  此刻,打文字的手穿过似乎有你的夜晚
  蛙鸣与心跳搅在一起
  我怀疑对面水面上端坐
  一个莲花般开放的你
  似尼罗河之水,被傻木头冲击
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PostPosted: 2009-06-22 11:57:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

梦幻纯情的。。。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 00:57:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
梦幻纯情的。。。
感谢留言,问您愉快。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 01:00:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

很喜欢您的诗歌,优雅含蓄,浪漫柔和!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 23:39:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

林岳芳 wrote:
很喜欢您的诗歌,优雅含蓄,浪漫柔和!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-26 09:16:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

有童话般色彩~问好爱月!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-26 11:58:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯真,真纯!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-26 16:55:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢明月、李有明留言。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-26 19:36:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这美丽的氛围
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PostPosted: 2009-06-26 21:07:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

青春的愛歌,
你拉我的手
我们就这么走进情人夜...
柔情似水令人响往.
不錯的情歌!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-27 05:32:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

来尝尝,小点心味道真不错
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PostPosted: 2009-06-28 00:49:43    Post subject: 问好 Reply with quote

山桃花 wrote:
喜欢这美丽的氛围
问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-28 00:51:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

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青春的愛歌,
...
看见您在我很开心哦~谢谢留言。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-28 00:52:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
来尝尝,小点心味道真不错
(*^__^*)想念。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-29 04:08:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

很甜很美。问好。
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