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投六期<<必须承认桃花的红>>
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PostPosted: 2009-06-16 18:14:47    Post subject: 投六期<<必须承认桃花的红>> Reply with quote

1.<<必须承认桃花的红>>

土地第七次打开孕期 妖娆在三月
开荒种地 请给予一滴雨的情绪
草没上早春的腰际 有绿 桃就有花的痕迹


在青涩之前 蚯蚓抛弃新土
烈日悲壮地死去
怀念桃之妖妖的河谷吧 一把旧词唱空桃李


咀嚼粉 践踏红
此情此景 蝴蝶轻浮地怜香惜玉
唇间抚起扬州古老的烟熏
再次闪耀的红插入
苏徥

2.<<最后一行是爱情>>

穿过北纬
张着蓝地白色 翻越一道岭
一直向北被淹没的十字 在一个早春诉说着信仰

南边的火车和铁轨
在季节的车厢相互迤逶 一行是爱情
一行是风和日丽在雷电交加时刻美丽的垂危

就此放飞吧 正午魁梧的身姿
一边是刺目的碎阳光
一边是白花花的芦苇荡

此起彼伏的城市鸟鸣在燕子和一只大鸟的身影里
写下最后一行爱情


3.<<泥土 汗水 高粱地>>

-------读著名诗人鲁绪刚的诗歌


葡匐着一亩高粱地的情绪 瓦罐在芬芳中颤栗
低吟的山坡 和一头老黄牛
挥洒起秋天的汗水
孤独的是玉米须 窥视着姑娘的裙裾
春日里的叶子避开镰刀 迎接喜洋洋的镜子
落日和夕阳在土地的头发丝里拨节 湖水氤氲
长安 在蔚蓝的迷底中洗涤尘埃
浪涛声主宰北方大汉 语音高亢
雨和鸟鸣在夜里伸出橄榄枝 重复着祥和热爱
远古的植物 在诗行吐出七彩
大步流星 野菊在歌声中
喝彩 暮然
人已到中年


4.<<梦见执白的花朵>>


我收藏了仲日的秋波 几行袅娜
正午热情似火 你是一朵执白的花
将我的柔情包裹 深夜的梦幻就这样不知所措


我重蹈一滴水的覆辙 一片霜过
微风分享着小草的欢乐 山间有青色的螳螂出没
我的泪珠镶嵌着琥珀 你走过沙漠


冬季和八月在地平线重和 雪花翻滚着炙热
素描着你的脸 玻璃将你的影子折射
此时的茉莉蜿蜒着初次的迷失
一朵接着一朵


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PostPosted: 2009-06-21 22:04:38    Post subject: 修改一下,大家批评. Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2009-06-24 03:56:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

Confused Evil or Very Mad
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 00:42:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

有节奏。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 06:11:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

绪刚诗友的乡土诗我也很喜欢读哈
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PostPosted: 2009-06-26 19:24:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱月 wrote:
有节奏。



Very Happy 很高兴爱月品读,谢谢.
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PostPosted: 2009-06-26 19:37:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2009-06-27 05:11:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

我收藏了仲日的秋波 几行袅娜
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PostPosted: 2009-06-27 18:59:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

晴宝儿 wrote:
绪刚诗友的乡土诗我也很喜欢读哈



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PostPosted: 2009-06-27 19:01:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

我承认桃花是红的 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-06-27 23:26:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌景象繁华~~
问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-06-28 16:24:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

刘浪 wrote:
我承认桃花是红的 Laughing



呵呵,"流浪"的桃花初外......
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